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Linda
by Carolyn Collins

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Comment by Silvia. on 06/26/11
very,very, very bad story.
You know how to write a story. I don't know why you wrote a story so bad.

Comment by Silvia on 06/22/11
Bad

Comment by Loree on 05/19/11
You’re a real deep thinker. Thanks for shnarig.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 11/02/07
With blackmailing "friends" like Debbie and Joy and Joy's pedophile mother, Leon had no need of other enemies. But it's hard to sympathize with him as he falls for the big jerk he knew was a violent bully. I expect that once Ted has had his way with Linda a few times he will become just as abusive of her as he was of Leon.

This would have been a great story without the sex and sexual abuse.


Comment by dee on 09/05/07
thestory was really great and made me envy leon. the final ending was
a stroke of genius,but you could have done without some of the sex.

Comment by Rone welles on 07/08/07
Very good story and great charactors you could have done without the sex at the last part and still had a wonderful story ...
thank you Rone :)

Comment by Rone welles on 07/08/07
Very good story and great charactors you could have done with the sex at the last part and still had a wonderful story ...
thank you Rone :)

Comment by Stefan on 03/30/06
Loved this story. It brought back many wishful memories.

Comment by Jan_Wytte on 11/02/03
Dear Carolyn:
I just read your story titled "Linda". I really love your stories!  I read the first one more than 3 years ago, and I like them so much, I am always on the lookout for them.
Good character developement. Nice storyline. Well edited. I wish I could find more.
Searchingly, Jan

Comment by Diane Sutton on 12/03/01
Such a beautifully written story I'm so glad I had the opportunity to read it. Every detail seemed to fit the story well and I had absolutely no trouble finding it enjoyable to read. I'm really glad I had this time to read something so sweet and will surely take whatever time needed to read other stories by this author.

Comment by Sissy Priscilla Valentine on 08/19/01
Once again I'm jealous of yet another of "our" Heroines!  Linda is a lucky little girl!  I like your style, Carrie baby!

Kisses!


Sissy Prissy



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