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THIS WAS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE READ IN 2 YEARS. I READ CRYSTALS STORIES 4 YEARS NOW IN ALPHABETICAL ORDER AND AM ONLY NOW ON THE LETTER K. AT FIRST I DIDNT WANT TO READ IT BECAUSE IT WAS LONG BUT THEN I COULD NOT STOP. I ONLY READ MAGICAL TRANSFORMATIONS MOSTLY BUT YOU ADDED TO THAT. I WISH YOU WOULD HAVE MADE IT MORE R RATED BUT NO NEED.IAMM GOING TO MISS THIS STORY.

I have wanted to read this story for a long time.  I didn't because I couldn't find the story on which it is based.  I finally found Diane Christy's "I, my sister" at Sapphire's and read it.  It was a pleasant surprise to find almost all of that story incorporated in Part 2 of "Al Parker."  Now I will go on and read Kelly Davidson's "Andersonville" saga.

I enjoyed the way that Kelly Davidson added onto the beginning and told how Al Parker/Jennifer Anderson came to be in the house in Part One.  I also liked how Part 3 tied up the loose ends.  I thought it was a well-written story.  The characters seemed to come to life and I found myself eagerly wanting to know more.  Thenks, Kelly, for an excellent story.

Shari

I liked the story, but I think that jennifer was not needing to suffer so much.
Good story, I iked it.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Wow!  I really liked this story. Well written and captivating no less!  I felt like I was in the story itself which is to me very important.  Keep up the good work Kelly.

               Vivien

P.S By the way, it would be nice if the serum were real. I owuld use it on myself,LOL!

A classic! The life and death of Al Parker is a triumphent achievement. It is of the highest quality, bold in size and scope, and mesmerizing in its attention to detail.

Thanks.

A great story. I enjoyed it from start to finish. You kept the pace of the story even though out and it made for an enjoyable read.

I must say  that I have a perchant for long stories. Your story was well worth the time it took for me to read it. The way you weave the characters into the story is spell binding. I consider this to be one of the better written stories I have read. I can only hope that other aspiring authors take the time to read your works. They can lean a lot from what you have to offer. I hope you live a long life so that you can continue to send us, your readers more stories such as this one so as to inspire us to write ourselves. I somewhat expected the way you ended the story and it's my hope that if you don't get tired with the story you will continue with another installment to it.

Kelly

Hurray for you!

Terrific job with this old story that was so frustratingly left hangning! Not only do you spin a good yarn, but much more importantly, you made Jennifer and Tom come alive. It was easy to care about them and therefore to be really moved when Al/Jennifer has to to say goodbye to Al's old girlfriend and then when he/she meets Jennifer's real parents. Giving Tom and Al the parents they never had was a nice touch for us old sentimentalists.

Keep up the good work

     

This last part was the best read. I'm one who is always up for a reason to have a good cry.

Wow, wow, wow....just finished part 3. Too many good things to comment on them all. You should be given an award for finishing this story AND at the same time you left it open at the end for maybe more???? I hope so and cannot wait to read more.

Well this story was something that made me cry something I dont do that often. For once it was a true tale of forced feminization and in many ways a happy ending for all. It didn't detract from realism or anything (its a sci-fi tg story) but it seemed real and nothing was out of the ordinary. Most of all you tied up all the loose knots not leaving us to wonder about all the chracters and such.

Keep up the good work Kelly but stay true to your roots

I haven't seen part 3 yet, but the first two parts are absolutely delightful.  This is great stuff!

Have wanted to see this story finished for such a long time! Thanks for taking the time to share your talent with all of us.

Although you did not start the original, the only down side is due to my personal dislike of smoking, never cared for that part.

Really hope we see Jennifer aquire a new "girlfriend" in Tom. Then escape together and be lifelong friends....

I had enjoyed I MYSISTER but I don't believe in comparing work. Your current work stands out on its own as enjoyable.