An enthralling story, despite unusual nature written in a very believable manner.
My one serious inquiry is was the tale added to after the first two chapters?

You’ve got it in one. Cdolun’t have put it better.

No comment!
The tale isn't finished.
Silvia.

Andrea; bravo, what a story and what exceptional writing! Riki

I just read, or possibly re-read, the story about Leslie.  I just want to say Mon Francais se ne pas bonne que vous, so I didnt mind it.
Ich wouldna ha minded wenn es auch ein Bisschen Deutsch drin war !

Anyway, I hope you will one day continue this tale, as it is really good, and does capture some of the chaos atmosphere of those times, as I too recall them.

Bravo for a good style, a series of events happening that Leslie had to react to, and the confusion of a child raised in ignorence of whether he or she was a boy or girl really.  Tres brav !

Thank you!  A really good, well-crafted story, and I think you heeded the comment about the French language - much better!
Now you have me impatient to hear how Leslie made out in wartime London.  I hope we won't have to wait so long for the next instalment.

I hope this story will be continued one day, even though two years have passed, but next time, please get it edited.  The French is appalling!  Madame would have broken the hairbrush on little Leslie's bottom if she had submitted her lessons like that.