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Left Field II
by Starhawk

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Comment by Angie on 11/25/15
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Comment by Nopacs on 12/01/01
I enjoyed your tales. I particularly enjoyed the romance in the story being something of an old softy myself. I also enjoyed the fact that it was well written and avoided gratuitous sex that left nothing to the imagination. My only concern is that it seems unlikely for a teenage boy to feel such a strong emotional attachment for anyone else - boy or girl. If the two 'boys' were perhaps 17, then it might ring truer. Nevertheless, the stories are well above the average for this genre. Please keep writing.

Comment by Donna on 07/23/01
I enjoyed the story very much and look forward to more of your stories when they appear.

Comment by Emma Banin on 12/10/00
What a beautifully told romantic tale. I wish this was a full length novel. You've managed to tell a sensuous, romantic story without spoilin it with graphic descriptions of sex. I'd love to see this continue with Stacey undergoing srs, and marrying Vincent. Romantic fiction at its' best.

Comment by Karen Ann on 12/08/00
Lsft Field was one of the better written and touching stories that I have read.  You have a great gift for dialog and setting the scene.  The romantic element of your story is refreshing indeed!  I look forward to the story development and the home life environment of your heroine and her mother.

Comment by paul jutras on 12/08/00
Left Field 2 was an interesting story. Though I had to think if I read the original you mentioned or not.



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