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Laura's Girl
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Comment by julih on 12/27/12
great story most enjoyable Comment by Dona Whimper on 01/25/10 Very interesting getting into her mind while she was bound, I can tell you it does cause a mind shift to be under someones control. Comment by juliej on 12/03/07 brilliant story more please Comment by juliej on 07/14/07 i thought again this was a brilliant story i stand by my previous comments Comment by juliej on 06/14/05 a story of an ordeal including kidnap&enforeced femininity what a great story well written&described what a way to go Comment by ~sissy~ on 03/09/05 I think everybody who complained were total wusses. this is a beautiful piece of work. hands down best story on the website. bravo. Comment by Alan N. on 08/12/04 Great story!!! Well written, good convience of emotions and feelings. Hope to see more. Comment by julie j on 07/13/04 wow what heavy story really well written and described the use of chains and basement with the minor furnishings were great a lesson learnt and revenge was the motive in this story excellent Comment by storyreader on 08/27/01 I liked your story. Well written. Appealing to a submissive. Comment by popeyeUK on 08/21/01 I loved the story, and envy Jane. The story is a genuine submissives fantasy. Thank you Jane, I welcome more of the same genre. Comment by Nellie D on 07/26/01 A very nasty story that doesn't deserve the space it takes up. Comment by Mina on 07/26/01 As boring as watching paint dry, It could have been so much better if only she would have taken the time to give her dark visions a storyline.....Mina deSade Comment by Trebor on 07/26/01 That bitch should be in jail so she could be reamed out herself. Comment by Debi on 07/26/01 Too violent! |
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