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Lakeside View
by Ann O'Nonymous

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Comment by licky on 12/19/13
this is an interesting counter-point to that rapist clinci story i read. It still bothers me because of hwo stupid the premise is (not your story, the rapist clinic one. I can't recall the title atm).

Anyways years later i find this while persuing the...broken storysite, and i rather liked it. it seems that anyone who is harmed would turn to revenge. thanks for the fun read ^^


Comment by Silvia. on 09/09/10
I would like to know what happened with joe's mother and sister?
He did not kill them too?
Silvia.

Comment by juliej on 04/06/07
an interesting story of intreuge worth adding more to it

Comment by Mr Man on 05/22/01
Great story! I like a good suspensefull tale of horror, so naturally I'd like to read more about this guy. Thanks for writing.

Comment by "Princess Pervette" on 05/22/01
As usual, a story with a grim twist.  So much for all those fantasies about feminized kids!

Your stories are always original and always winners.  This one's no exception.

Pervy

Comment by Marti B on 05/22/01
Wow!  Just like you, I'll be brief and I think that one word covers it.

Comment by Pickles on 05/22/01
Ann you never fail to amaze me. You have said so much in such a short story. Probably what would happen in a femdom child situation. The boy would grow up hating women.
Love and Warmth
Pickles



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