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Lady In Training
by Michelle A

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Comment by link building on 07/18/14
On6yHI Really appreciate you sharing this article post.Really looking forward to read more. Keep writing.
Comment by Katie Jean Miller on 03/31/12
This story is just wonderful and I love it very much. It's a syory that touches my heart.
Comment by Kristy on 07/21/11
This piece was cogent, well-wreittn, and pithy.
Comment by Danice on 07/20/11
Your article was excellent and eudrite.
Comment by SarahPaul on 07/06/10
A Wonderful story !

I Love stories with a twist at the end . And that was Amazing !

You have written a story that You should be Proud of ! You have a Gifted Talent !

A Entertaining story with sentiment without being sickly sweet.

A Very Well thought out story .


Thank You for being So Kind in sharing it with the world


Wonderful !!!

and

Thank You !!

Comment by Aleesha on 07/06/10
This was an unusual story but I liked it. Thanks.
Comment by leelee on 07/06/08
A stuck up girl from Pawtucket?  I am from Pawtucket  and we are not stuck up gurls   we just have fat hair  and soft clits....anyway a nice story    makes me wonder how I would explain to my children when and if they find me in my gurly things......
Comment by Nikki on 06/30/06
Oh.
My.
God!!!




This is now one of my top 5 favorite stories.
Comment by julie j on 10/02/04
the story is heavey but the explanations are ok its a stry that could with mor explanations withregard to how he got out of hand at first then carry on from there
Comment by Denise Em on 04/17/03
  It's difficult to add anything meaningful to what has already been  
said - especially without giving away the surprise.  I was thinking of referring to its "O. Henry" style twist, except that - strictly speaking - it isn't, since the revelation starts not quite half-way into the narrative, rather than near the end.

  I, too, love the supportive style of the mother and grandmother.

  I hope we soon see more of your work.

Deni


Comment by shalimar on 08/09/02
Very nicely done.  I felt the love of Michelle's mother and grandmother in this story.  I see you are a fan of the Alfred Hitchock/Twilight Zone kind of story.

I cried.  Gets a 1 tissue from me.
Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 07/08/01
What a switcheroo!  Same old same old PP story, I thought; was I surprised!  Congrats!
Comment by Nellie D on 07/06/01
What an unusual story! It starts out reading like a petticoat punishment theme and switches right in the middle. The ending isn't even close to what you think it might be when you start the story.

Very good story.
Comment by Sandra on 07/06/01
The story is a surprise from the beginning till to the end. Believe me, you will never be able to say how this story goes on and how it end.

Michelle, that is a wonderful story, thank you very much for it and I hope to read soon more like this.

A hug from the heart,
Sandra


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