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Labyrinth of Change: First Maze
by Autumn Winters

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Comment by Silvia. on 10/25/10
Sorry, but I didn't like it!

Comment by Cam on 01/10/10
A delightful story. I felt very disappointed when it just stopped.I had so identified with the story teller that I was excitedly looking forward to its denoument.

Comment by Faye Kistry on 01/11/01
Loved both the stories and your excellent prose style.
You handled the transformations wonderfully - your characters seem well drawn and this makes the transformations all the more convincing.

Cheers!

Comment by Mr Man on 01/11/01
Well Travesty, it seems you are two for two in the quality story department. That you have written two very good storys which where completely different in style and form, shows great talent and ability. I look forward to your next effort.

Comment by paul jutras on 01/10/01
Enjoyed the labyrith of changes and the Japanese at the end. Don't know if all the Japanese changes in Crywstal poll gave the idea. Notice how some of the problems to solve seem simular to different movies and shows though result different.



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