I reread the story... It seems the author thinks that sticking up for ones-self is a 'masculine' character flaw? There is a very narrow window where I think if I were he I would have risen from that couch and packed a bag to get away from them (when it was revealed that their intent was to blackmail him). There is no congenial way to blackmail someone. It is in all cases an abuse of power. It is like coercion to sign a contract (which is a type of blackmail).

This dang editors making me look like a noob.

Life in prison really!?! No harm, no foul! Now what they would have done had he stood up for himself more sternly is anyone's guess. But there was no lasting and irreversible change done. The story covered the possibility of betrayal by his internal thoughts about his trusting his sister. That trust she did NOT violate.

Until the sequel does come out I'm going to believe that these women were doing what they say they were doing and that he faced no forced changes. (the pervert in me expected him to be breast fed ya gotta admit it sort of built you up to thinking that).

Well the lesbian thing was piling it on thick and the troup of cheerleaders but all in all this story was more to my liking. It showed real warmth from his family.

Life in prison really!?! No harm, no foul! Now what they would have done had he stood up for himself more sternly is anyone's guess. But there was no lasting and irreversible change done. The story covered the possibility of betrayal by his internal thoughts about his trusting his sister. That trust she did NOT violate.

Until the sequel does come out I'm going to believe that these women were doing what they say they were doing and that he faced no forced changes. (the pervert in me expected him to be breast fed ya gotta admit it sort of built you up to thinking that).

Well the lesbian thing was piling it on thick and the troup of cheerleaders but all in all this story was more to my liking. It showed real warmth from his family.

His mother and her lesbian lover,his sister, and her friends should get life in prison.
Silvia.

No, Molly. She was getting revenge on him for being too nice.  It says so in the describtion.  How dare he be a kind, considerate brother!!!  How dare he touch her things without asking!!!  He is clearly a monster that was stopped before he did something unforgivable like let her borrow money or do her chores out of the kindness of his heart.  Thank God this beast is being transformed into a girl so that his niceness will be "normal."

its a great sweet story welldone

I liked the story. I've been caught so many times in fantasy and actuality by those who weren't in any sense friends it's fine to consider the alternative.

WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO FINISH IT. I LIKED IT SORT OF, AND I DO NOT BLAME THE WOMEN, MOST OF US MEN ARE PIGS, BUT NOT ME.

Sigh... One of these days, I'll learn to read the synopses more closely, and take note of the "femdom" category and "diapers" keyword when they appear together in the same blurb. "Judy's Revenge." Revenge for precisely WHAT, pray tell? For the crime of breathing while being male? For trying on his sister's clothes? For being gentle and generous and, consequently, a wimp? Nellie D writes "...with no humiliation to the lead character." Excuse me? Are we discussing the same story?

The best expression of POV (Point Of View) I have ever heard in one sentence: "One man's terrorist is another man's freedom fighter." Likewise, one person's fantasy is another person's nightmare. Apparently Viven Britton agrees with the author's "I should be this lucky!" Sure, if being humiliated, blackmailed (even if by implication), and wrapped in poopy diapers is your thing, be my guest! I once knew someone who said of the man who beats his head against a wall (y'know, that well-worn expression concerning the foolish, ridiculous, vainglorious tilting at windmills that is guaranteed to end in frustration?), "How do you know? Maybe he likes it!"

revenge is a dish wellsort out after and a perfect plant to trap her son this is well worth continuing

 Well done the set up and results were great ...nice story..

thank you for shareing ......  XO :) rone

i loved this story well written to be continued yes please it can go many places perfect set up but no hassle or arguements a great contribution to a great story more please

Kewl story!  I only wish that I could have been that lucky!  Carla has a great sister and a lot of new friends to teach her how to be a real girl!  I am jealous even though it's only a story!

                  Vivien

a very good story well written to be continued yes please it was a very good setup i was quite suprised that allen took every thing so meekly after being caught out like that it would be interesting to see how far that this story will go to me it could go on at least for another couple of parts

Oh Ann, you just have to finish this. I can't wait for the next part.

Barb

A good caught story with no humiliation to the lead character. In the end a few truths were shared and a feeling of loving acceptance.

I really had problems with the "Hasty Act" series, finding "Hasty Act" itself believable and "Aftermath" totally unbelievable, both given Joe's history and the fact that the girls had to know of his history.  However, I see the same "Real men can allow themselves to be diapered and dressed as little girls and exposed to friends and starangers by someone they trust; only wimps freak out." carried over into this story.  In this story, though, it is much more believable as there is no history of abuse to Al such as there was to Joe in the "Hasty Act" series, and no actions on the part of Judy's friends to make him feel as though his trust had been betrayed, unlike the laughter of Monica and her friends in "Hasty Act".
Jezzi Belle Stewart

Very good story, nice plot twists, good denouement.  But I wouldn't extend it, if I were you.  You've made your point.

Pervy

LOok forward to more of this story and what happens at the slumber party.  Good caught and result story.