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Jenny's Submissive Training
by Ms. Bianca

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Comment by Priscilla Ann on 03/27/08
Superb, Ms. Bianca. Thank you for a brilliant story of submission, training and servitude. You have correctly made clear that punishment for disobedience or performing poorly, whether it be in duties or curtsies, is parmount to the successful subjugation of a sissy maid. Maid Jenny obviously learned her lessons well, as have I under the strict tutelage of Mistress Meredith. Thank you, again, Ms. Bianca.

Comment by Rachel Rae on 04/24/04
Lovely story.  I can relate to it and inject myself into the parts where I have experienced a like experience.  The only part I didn't like, not only in your stories, is the inclusion of the immediate family.  I like to think that the transformation is a private matter entirely separate from the past and the transformant should look to the future with a brand new set of friends.  But still, I loved the story.    Luv   Rachel Rae   I'm at reijifu and write stories as Rachel.

Comment by julie on 04/08/03
good story but written very fast more explanations of the training would be good and of punishments and nightime whether in her own room or bound hand and foot at the end of his mistress bed otherwise good

Comment by tammy on 03/13/03
this was truly a wonderful story... i loved ever word of it...i felt captivated by the sensitive and delicate story...i wish that i had been in jenny's place under her Mistress' dress. fantastic

Comment by Mina Pandora de Sade on 12/05/01
A decidedly different story for this genre, Interesting and well thought out. I was reminded mostly of the Leopold Von Sacher Masoch's work "Venus in Furs" or the Don Alera novel "Frederique" in as much as the fetishistic nature of the work is somewhat overpowered by flowery textile romances and severe charecter development. I found few if any faults with the story and would beg upon bended knee for this author to continue her work in the realm of the short story...Darkest, Mina Pandora de Sade

Comment by Cordelia on 12/02/01
Loved, adore and was transported by it to a world where I was jenny.  A very well written story for a first time author. The style reminds me of two other very good authors who have stories in this sight.  Look forward for many more tales from this talented writer.  Hugs Cor.



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