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JayCee
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Comment by Davina on 07/22/13
Superbly thought out and a joy to read. Vicki's English is immaculate and everything makes sense and comes together beautifully. Thanks Vicki. Comment by Davina on 10/30/12 A beautiful story about beautiful people with glorious activities. A wonderful writer. I must read as much of Vicki's delightful prose as I can find. Comment by Stephen on 07/09/12 I loved this story. Complicated, interesting characters - like us - that broadened my imagination. Stayed with me. A parable, really. Comment by Annabelle B on 01/13/10 Wow I really enjoyed this story. Yes its long, but only incresses the pleasure in reading it. I enjoyed how Jaycee has her way with two boys at the beginings of this story (no I'm not telling) very hot!! Comment by julie j on 01/20/05 this story is very long i will have to read it prpoerly at a later date Comment by Hal on 04/23/03 I've enjoyed many of Vickie's stories, but I believe JayCee has to be one of her all-time greats. The characters are ao fascinating and the psychological details so absorbing that the story flows like silk. My only regret is that it ever has to end! Comment by julie on 03/09/03 a long and interesting story the way it was laid out was very good iwas suprised that he could not tellthe difference between a game and reality and that he did not relise untill to late what had happened Comment by Jessica on 05/13/02 I loved it, wish I had Marion's opportunity.... Comment by Sissy Priscilla Valentine on 08/18/01 Incredibly beautiful story! I had to laugh at the demise of Marion's father! But being TG myself I was most attracted to the relationship between JayCee and Marianne, and would gladly have taken Marianne's place and voluntarily, no, eagerly begged Marianne's Mother for the help she gave her in puberty. An eloquently written piece! You GO girl! Comment by Annemarie Farelle on 03/05/01 I just read the story of Jaycee helping her neighbor. I loved the first part with the two boys as Jaycee described what a girl is. So wonderful to hear your words. You put so much together for me and the erotic enjoyment is mixed totally into the delight of this preson's mystery about himself all his life. His mystery about girls and women are beautiful told. Always in control simply because of what the writer composes that the girl is so beautifulm once she knows how beautiful she is, the men in her life are happy to serve her and be therew for her. |
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