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I Screwed Up
by Kelly

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Comment by Dianna on 07/30/08
anger is the enemy of any relationship. It destroys it. the ending seemed...wrong to me.

Comment by Yoron on 06/06/08
So f*ng ugly.
Jesus, there is no dreams left in those stories, only nightmares.

Where do you find those characters.
Under a rock?

Get me out of here :)

Yoron


Comment by juliej on 03/17/08
a good story

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 07/02/05
Very nice story and very well written - not the kind of story for which a casual read will do.  At first this story made me mad and angry at the wife, but then I realized from the way he took the punishment that he must have felt he deserved it and accepted it.  Also there was the fact that while she was implaccable and stern about feminizing him, she was never mean or malicious and made no attempt to humiliate him beyond the feminization itself - no fetish clothing, oral sex, etc.  I thought setting up the date toward the end was a bit much, but it did occur after the collar was removed and I suppose he could have said no - though I wonder what she would have done if he had.  I am surprised that nothing was mentioned about SRS at the end.

Comment by julie on 03/17/03
A very good story it showed who was the boss and what the options were
but unprotected sex is a no no all the time and passing on the dieaese
to his wife  was very bad excellent show of revenge by his wife a hard lesson learnt excellent writing and a very good story more please



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