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In the Name of the Prophet
by Roy Del Frink

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Comment by Rhiannon Sara Melton on 06/15/10
Blessings love your story. I have studied with the Sufi's for a long while and any other spiritual teachings I could find. Truth is stranger then fiction and your story has a lot of truth.
Love and Light Rhiannon

Comment by Mr Man on 01/24/01
I thought this was a well written story and showed much potential, however I'm a little disturbed by the sterotypical characters involved. I'm not trying to come down on you with a lot of politicaly correct B.S.. I just feel that labeling is such an inflamatory thing. Anyway, sermon over. I hope you write more stories, and that my little criticism doesn't stop you from posting.
Mr Man

Comment by Paula Jutras on 01/23/01
always love a story where the character becomes a Paula. Really help me get into the character and enjoy it just a bit more. Even though I loved this short tale



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