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The Inheritor
by Prudence Walker

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Comment by Silvia. on 02/03/12
Hi Prue!
As always, you made a wonderful job!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Bruce on 05/24/09
magnificent

Comment by Briar on 11/10/07
This story has it all - the wicked are punished but with mercy, the downtrodden are lifted up and made happy, there is love, a little soft titillation, sci-fi bordering on magic, loveable characters, a good plot....  

It is too much to ask an artist who has created a Meisterwerk to do it again, but if I dare, for all your fans, Pru, may I ask?

Briar


Comment by robin on 05/22/01
I enjoyed your story very much.  A SciFi fantasy to be proud of and delighted with.  I look forward to seeing and reading more of your works.

Comment by Virg. on 03/01/01
Dear Prue,

Congradulations. The arduous efforts you have expended in assuring this tale was presented with style and grace deserves a full curtsey from all your devoted readers, muse. You have gained my sincere admiration quickly with your earlier efforts. You now have earned my envy, as well. (Does green look becoming on me?)

Inheritor is worth reading again and again, for the sheer pleasure of enjoying your marvelous persentation style. The suspense and drama as the tale evolves is both captivating and scintillating. Love it!

Virginia.  

Comment by Terry on 02/25/01
This is another great story, Prue.  It was fun to see how you took care of the henchmen.  I'll bet they are cute as 5 year-old girls.  I am curious as to how would they be called nieces when Phoebe was an only child?  Maybe I misread part two.  That has happened before, right Paula?

Comment by Mr Man on 02/25/01
I just finished parts 2 and 3, and have to say that the story is moving along and shaping up nicely. I like the writing style, and I like what you've done with the killers. Now how about getting some payback on the uncle? Anyhow, I look forward to your next installment, and thank you for your very good story.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 02/24/01
enjoyed part 2 even more than 1. keep up the work

Comment by emmie dee on 02/23/01
Excellent beginning! Suspenseful, taut, gripping. Coming to your local theatre soon? I can hardly wait for its continuation.

Comment by Mr Man on 02/23/01
This looks like a great start to a new serial. I hope you continue it soon. Thanks for writing and good job.

Comment by Cathy_t_ on 02/22/01
Well, Prue, my little Kiwi bulldozer!  I'm proud to have been a part of this one, minor though my part was.  It's kinda neat to have a story based in my home town and I was happy to be able to provide you with the geological info you wanted.  Havine read what you have sent me of this tale, I know that it will be a CRACKING good tale and I can't help but feel happy for you that you have found this previously unknown talent within yourself and have become quite an accomplished writer.  Proud to know ya, m'luv and happy to assist in any way, as always.  Well Done, Prue.
                            Cathy_t_ said that, and meant it!

Comment by Rose2 on 02/22/01
  EVERYONE trust me I think this is one we all want to stay till the ending.  Oh and I normally don't pick up hitch hikers.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 02/22/01
type of story I never considered for that universe before.



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