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I'll Be Home For Christmas
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Comment by link building on 10/26/13
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Comment by Johnny on 07/27/09
I do not care what the other readers thought, this story was well written, entertaining and brilliant in it's delivery!

Comment by Bruce on 06/04/09
no matter the humilation causing another person to be sold into slavery isnt right i hate this story no matter how well its crafted..now i have to try to get it out of my mind ..dang u all to hell

Comment by Dianna on 03/20/08
NOTHING 'practical' about that joke. Nothing funny either. It was hard for me not to think 'you poor poor man'. Hun, it's stories like these that paint women out to be petty and vindictive.

Comment by Priscilla Ann on 02/14/08
Oh my, what a terrible price this poor dear paid -- and it served him right. Outrageously fun tale of comeupance

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 03/30/05
A well written story, but I ended up thinking "poor guy" and "evil psychotic bitches" rather than "The bastard got what he deserved."

Did he ever hit the girls?  Was he ever less than a gentleman in the way he treated them individually?  Did they have any complaints about him before they found he was dating all four?  I admit that knowing they wanted a monogamous relationship, he was a jerk to date all four, but he certainly did not deserve what they did to him.  It would have been different if they had really been trying to teach him a lesson as they said and had been keeping tabs on him so as to pick him up after he'd suffered awhile, but obviously that was not the case (or we are not told that it was)  As far as we are told, they left him in a position where there was a real chance he could have died - twisted his ankle because of the shoes and died from the cold and dehydration or wild animals that he could not adequately defend himself against overnight  for example.  This seems another story where the readers' sampathies are reversed from what they should be because the women do so much worse to the man than he ever did to them in the name of revenge only .

Also, if trained medical personnell  looked him over in regard to upcoming surgery, I would think they would have discovered the truth about his sex/gender.  For example, removing the collar would probably have revealed an adam's apple.


Comment by julie on 02/21/04
what a brilliant story it certanly showed how his 4 grilfriends got there revenge what is that people say a woman scorned is an evil woman when it comes to revenge he deserved everything he got and from the way the story goes far more than ever expected,ending up as a slave and being bidded for I would like to read more of this story about his training,punishments and bondage and it would be great if at the very end he was returned back to his previous girlfreinds asa maid what a story this would make



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