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Identity Theft
by Ellie Dauber

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Comment by Brett on 12/03/09
Ellie, this story ranks right up there with BB's "The Purse Snatcher".  While it's no where near as long, Elsbeth went out of her way to be compassionate, when she could have been quite otherwise.  Thank you for such a treat.

Blessings,

Brett


Comment by NB on 07/15/02
I usually don't like your Elsbeth Lange character because none of her "punishments" are permanent and are usually loaded with preaching. 'Identity Theft' was a pleasant exception, and I loved it. Well written with a  satisfying ending. You're one of my favorites! (p.s....if I steal your credit card PIN, can you do THAT to me???)

Comment by Petra Jane on 01/07/01
Again, really do like the story and as for the come-uppence, wicked!
Only quibble, in the Two Lessons Taught story, Dr Twoknives first name was Daniel, in this it was Mike?

Anyway, I look forward to the next instalment



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