love the story.
if you continue it maybe you could show how after Evelyn takes advantage of Sara, Richard gives it to Evelyn in the (end).....

this is absolutely brehiataktng! I wish you'd come stay with me and teach me to bake these amazing foods<3I've been meaning to tell you, there's a person on my LJ friends list you took one of your self-portraits and made it his icon..it's a bit weird and I tried to kindly ask him why he did that/if he talked to you about it. It's just strange because I was thinking, "alright that's my friend..and that's just weird." hahah I hope you're well lovely<3

again just had to read this one over again. OOOOHHHHHHH!!

oh yes, my type of PAL !!! nice read

The end is bad.
Evelyn, has nothing, to force Sara to do what she wants!
Sara has nothing to fear about being blackmailed by Evelyn.
The story isn't Ian and me.
The story is Ian, me, and Evelyn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  
Good story, bad end!
Silvia.

Just read Ian and me. I want to try on that dress!
And the story had all the elements i like. A situational struggle. Fear of getting caught. And surprise after surprise. Very well done.

Love this story. The full length corset dress was just spot on! This story inspired me to buy my own - I've now got eight!

Very good story.  You are a very good writer.  I expect that I will read all of your stories.

I love sara's stories

Kinky, sexy, fun, exciting, thrilling, mouth-watering - I've run out of adjectives!!
Even better, this is so similar to what happened in my life, the events that brought me right out into the open. It was wonderful to read something that brought such sweet (and painful!) memories.  Well done Bethany. Power to your writing arm, girl.
Love

Tammy
xxx

Congratulations! An exciting story with a lot of fun kink... I enjoyed it immensely.
Laura