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A Hunter's Tale
by Scrambler J

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Comment by Silvia. on 06/17/12
Bad story.

Comment by Aardvark on 12/26/02
Nice imagination. I enjoyed the wild ride.

The story moves and moves. You really put me in the middle of it all and my mind was put on hold for the duration. Still, it could have been much better. You colud have described the characters and scenes more and I certainly would have moved a little more slowly into the story to allow the reader to get a feel for the new world you created.

With just a little more writing skill paired to your natural storytelling skills, it would have been a truly kick-ass fantasy adventure.

I really hope you write more and maybe read a book on how to write a novel. This is not as bad a criticism as it sounds. The ability you have is extremely valuable and most people never have it. The other half, the writing techniques, is obtainable and anyone can learn it.

Keep it up.  

Comment by Nellie D on 05/26/01
An incredable tale of magic at several different levels. It contains many twists and convolted meanders on its journey. It took a very vivid imagination to create a plotline of such epic proportions. The detail and description enhance the characters.



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