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How Much of a Girl Did I Want To Be
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Comment by Mariah on 05/07/13
Bill really put out some effort to have his friends in skirts to support Elaine, his sister must have helped him pull it off. It took much of the initial attention off Elaine at school which was a great benefit as she blended in. Great imagination Janet! Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/24/07 Her real problem begins when she attaches the breast forms. After that, she stays a girl and Bill becomes her man. A complete girl? YES!!! Great story of discovery and love Comment by Rone Welles on 10/27/06 Ok its not perfict but close a great story again janet Comment by Diane Sutton on 04/10/01 Enjoyed reading the way you wove the character into the story and transformed Elaine into the girl of her dreams. I have enjoyed many of your stories and hope to read them all at some time in the future. Comment by Julia Manchester on 11/25/00 Well, you've done it again! Great story, Janet. I really liked the twist where Bill got his friends to dress up. Comment by Elaine on 11/25/00 The usual high quality we've come to expect but the theme/story line is common to many/all of your stories. any thing different in the pipeline? Comment by Barbara Marie on 11/25/00 Have enjoyed EVERY ONE of your stories as I have read them all. I only wish that I had the understanding parents that appear in your stories. Comment by paul jutras on 11/25/00 always enjoy a story with such a helpful mother. You're the best at writing that way. Enjoyed your latest tale as I've enjoyed all of them. |
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