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How I Spent My Summer
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Comment by Tamara Segunda on 03/22/18
My, my, if your story were human, it would be old enough to vote! I have no idea if you'll receive this, but if you do, I just wanted to let you know that people are still reading your work. I'm sure I read this years ago, but revisiting it last week, I have to say that it has aged very well. Still just as well written, just as evocative as ever. I especially liked your sensitive handling of Jenny's indeterminate/ambiguous sexual orientation. "How I Spent My Summer" remains one of the best of its kind. A greatly belated Brava! Best wishes. Comment by Grace on 05/24/14 Aleisha, you write a beautiful story. I can't wait for the next one. Comment by only for 5 dollars on 09/12/13 4ctnuy Im grateful for the article. Want more. Comment by Donna on 09/03/10 I found this a very good story... Comment by Silvia on 05/25/10 I'll tell you Aleisha! Comment by rae on 11/01/09 just lovely story Aleisha, it is wonderful accompanying a person take on freedom in softness, freeing form male gender role hashness. Comment by HD on 10/12/09 Very good story though hated being left hanging at the ending. You've got some writeing talent hope to find more of your stories on my never ending quest to read..... Comment by Geraldo on 08/04/09 I enjoyed your story very much. It was so gentle and loving. It conveyed the attraction and enjoyment that crossdressers instinctively feel about feminine clothing. That sense exuded off each page. Your characters were well selected also. Thank you for a great piece of work. I look forward to reading more of it. Comment by Jenn on 07/15/09 thank you the great story. and yes to a sequel. Comment by Scottish Mistress on 06/20/09 Aleisha, Comment by Suzanne on 02/11/09 An interesting story...rather "sexy" in parts...and loved the idea of being feminized...by women. I had a feminizing experience as a child with three of my aunts...and it reminded me of them. Comment by john on 05/07/08 yes please lets have another story - - loved it. Comment by john on 05/07/08 great story this one, wishI were Jennie!! Comment by Jennie O Connor on 12/31/07 Absolutely brilliant - I found this had some much - initially a bit long but the twists and turns taking in some much of a crossdresser's fantasy that I look forward to reading more of your stories. Comment by Denise Stiles on 09/12/07 I am not commenting to critize anything about this story about Johnny/Jennie but, only to tell you that I have read your story and that I enjoyed it so very much. If all of your works are as good, I hope to find as many as I can to read. Thank you so much and keep writing because you do have a unique talent. Comment by Janice on 04/04/07 Jsut read your story. It is very interesting and a great "family" story. I would like to see a follow up story to learn how Jennie did thru her life until she settles down with her "other half". Comment by Cassandra on 01/19/07 Hi Dear! Comment by Neil on 07/14/05 Absolutely brilliant story. Maybe as previous comments suggest that Johnny was a little too compliant to accept the change into Jennie, but then again maybe not as i pictured myself in his position and felt immensly jealeous but knowing that i would have been very willing to comply. Was disapointed that after Grandmother passed away that Jennie didn't return to be with Marie. I was rooting for that relationship to blossom as they were so much in love. Keep up the good work Aleisha, and please write some more about Johnny/Jennie Comment by julie j on 02/12/05 the summer must have seemes to go on forever the way it has been portryayed it is a good story none of the strugl=gle associated with life he just accepted it well done&written Comment by James Dewald on 11/14/04 Oh My God I just finsh your story and I have to say I loved it! This story had my heart betting so hard I at some part I had to walk away and most of the story I as fully hard. It was great! I saw my self as Jonny and felt what he left good and bad I wish I didn't read it so I could read it agen for the first time. I wish you would make a 2en story about Jennie and what happen to her like where did she go to school now she is a girl? does she make new friends and does her old friends learn of his change? Does she date men or women? Who does she merry is it a man or woman? So PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! Write a another story with her. Comment by Sabriel on 06/06/04 This was a truly inspiring story, don't you think so? I think it had an astounding plot and an even better writing style, along with what wasw either alot of research or a bizaar up-bringing^_^ I am very gald to have read this, and hope that you continue to write such masterpieces Ms. James Comment by TANYA on 03/10/04 WHAT A LOVELY STORY. I FELT AS IF THINGS WERE HAPPENING TO ME, AND I LOVED THEM. I EVEN FELT A BIT JEALOUS OF JOHNNY BECOMMING JENNY. Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 10/01/03 I just reread this after 2 1/2 years and then reread my comments. I stand by them, although as an alternative to rebellion he might, being an honorable boy, comply but with complete cold stoicism. At the initial confrontation, when Grandmother tells him what she intends, he stands and coldly makes the following statement. "I now see, Grandmother, why my father acts as he does. I promised my mother that I would obey you, so I will comply with your demands and follow your orders." and then do exactly as he was told, no more, and speak only when he was spoken to, and smile only when ordered to do so. I wonder how Grandmother and Marie would have reacted to a Jennie like that who kept scrupulously to the letter of the law and ignored the spirit of it. Would they still slip him the hormones? If so, he might think that that relieved him of the promise to follow orders. Comment by shaylynn on 05/23/03 Hi Aleisha Comment by nicole on 04/22/03 HI Aleisha, Comment by Alexia on 02/11/03 Well i'm a fan of your work now, i have to agree with some of the coments that the acceptance of jonnie was to easy, but thinking again if the choice is offered with such circunstances how many will stand as men and how many in the new roll?, the answer can´t be tell by any of us at least not by me i have never been in that kind of situation and i mean the entire picture. Comment by Donna Dee on 01/23/03 You have quite a mixed bag of comments, dont you? I find myself agreeing with both camps - the conversion of Jonnie was too easy but at the same time it was most enjoyable. There was so much to take in that I had to read it twice to appreciate it fully. Well done. Comment by Jeff on 01/04/03 I'm a big fan of your work, I've read many of your other stories elsewhere, and I just stumbled onto crystal's site, I was wondering if you might tell me where I could find more of your work? Comment by Virginia Krol on 12/03/02 The writing skill is good. The story line is interesting but the character is not developed over time. Johnny is too ready to become Jennie. Too easy so to speak. The introduction of hormone in the first summer is premature as this will prevent the essential story line of switching back and forth. Comment by Barbara Lynn on 11/13/02 This was a very engrossing story. I sat and read it all before taking a break and reading something else. Aleisha, you write very well indeed. If you continue this story, you should start from where Jennie has just met her father and they have talked. I would like to know if there were any more summers at Grandmother's. And what about Lisa and Donald's impending visit? Comment by tommygirl on 09/21/02 This is a very well written tale. The charecters are well drawn and compelling. I do not think Jonnie's acceptance of what was being done to him is believable at all. This is basically a story of child abuse by his grandmother and mother. The resentment and probable hatred for these women should have been addressed. The sexual relationship with the maid was disgusting and so obviously manipulative. There would be trauma from this cold cruelty for a sensative child to deal with, and I think the author should have done so. I realize this is fantasy, but good fantasy requires some stamp of truth and it is sadly missing here. The women's motives need careful explaination for doing this to a child. They seem to feel that this will make him a better man, but I am left with a very well written story of unexplained child abuse. The author is a wonderfull story teller and my comments are made to encourage growth, not to belittle the story. Comment by Fredrikka Joy on 04/21/02 Ok, first off, it was a long read. Would have been nice if I could have dragged the computer into the bathroom but it's too heavy, LOL. I had trouble relating to the "family tradition" too. But I was curious how our daring author would pull this off and so I stuck with her until I found out. Comment by Suzanne P. on 02/18/01 A very beautiful story, hope to read more from you in the future. Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 01/20/01 I liked the concept of the story, the "family tradition" I had trouble, though, suspending disbelief at the beginning. I think he accepts the feminization way way too easily. There was no hint that he had any feminine tendencies before the story opens, and he knows how his dad feels about his grandmother, so I think he would be VERY apprehensive about anything she proposes. When Grandmother shows him the picture, I would have expected him to think, *Oh my gawd, no wonder he hates her! No way!" and take off for the door. That took place before Marie saduced him, too, so he wasn't yet under her influence. Comment by josie on 01/20/01 In every genre there are but few who carry the stardards, and Aleisha James is unquestionable among the bearers. I recommend to all the sweet indulgence of "How I Spent My Summer", and come to know as I have one of the finest talents to be found anywhere. Comment by Paula Jutras on 01/19/01 Thanks for the sweet story. Even though it's fiction parts of it made me cry and I really loved the feminization of the main character in this tale. Comment by Judi on 01/19/01 Thank you for a very nice story. The feminization of Jennie certainly made him a more gentle child while preserving a very thought-provoking family tradition. I would hope that your story encourages more mothers to consider the merits of feminization, so that boys can learn to be less aggressive, kind, considerate and more respectful toward women. Thank you again. |
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