Good story, but I don't like incest!

    Hope is such a wonderful place,you have given us all Hope . Imagine all the people ,living  without hate ,oh uh oh ,you may say I am a dreamer  but  now I know I am not the only one !!!!!!!  I hope some day I can go there ,and learn to live as one !!!!!

    thank you for  your  wonderful  stories ......

This is a very good stroy though I was sadden when I came to the end of it because it seems like there needs to be more to it like what will happen to Darla or will he still be carl and what about him or her with Nikki and does Kelly become a sister through Marriage? There so much that could happen and The stroy was cut short before any of those could be answered

Nicely done and a very well thought out story to boot. I would have liked to have been Carl though. It's just too bad I didn't have a mother like that and find that town when I was younger.

Diane

Very nice stories and I wish you would continue. Would love to read more. Very good  

A nice story all the way throuh. Nothing hateful or degrading, just a loving family and wonderful neighbors.

Well, I was going to make a normal comment and suggestion, but then I thought, "normal.  AnnieO?  naaaah.  For all I can guess, you'll have carl changed into his mother's lover or his mother changed into his girlfriend, or have the whole damn town destroyed by global thermonuclear war.  I'll just wait and see.
  Jez

A nice and interesting beginning to a new story. Again we are at Hope, that somewhat strange town that Ann introduced us to in a previous story. This time we finding it gaining two new residents. The story centers around Susan and her son, Carl. I think Ann has some interesting twists planned for the two as they get use to their new home.