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Holly, Tiffani and Me
by Kimberli Nicole McCarthy

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Comment by ashley on 07/23/16
Wow, this was such a great story so thank you for that. Now I hope that you will continue with more episodes. Can do??? Don't let us readers wait toooooooo long.

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Comment by Lisa K on 10/13/08
Great story. I guess that there could be more of Tiffani. Many readers would love to hear how she and Mike are getting along.

Comment by nikki on 07/02/04
love it great story hope to read more your very talented hugs nikki

Comment by alyssa on 04/08/04
oh my gosh..I loved it..please continue the story!! I am hoked!!

Comment by Katya on 08/20/01
Many have said this already, I can only agree: great sweet story with just the right amount of reality and girl power to make it interesting. Hopefully the "to be continued" at the end will come true. Please keep writing!

Comment by richard on 08/09/01
very funny story,great comedy style. I can,t wait to read more
in the same vein.

Comment by joann on 02/10/01
great start, Tiffani is feeling empowered, curious to see if she wants to stay or is charlie coming back

Comment by Paula Jutras on 02/10/01
well done begining. Makes one want to read more.

Comment by Calesta on 02/10/01
Go Tiffani!! Good story, She is using her female powers.
Hugs Calesta

Comment by Dana Gene Swanson on 01/03/01
Wonderful romantic and exciting. I loved it. Please continue with the story. I cant wait to see how Charlie/Tiffani and Mike becomes even more romanticly envolved. What about Charlies sister...oh my...*smile*

Comment by Emma Elizabeth on 01/02/01
What a great romance to start the New Year.  Please keep it coming!

Comment by Tiffany Anne on 01/02/01
Great story to start off the new millenium!!!

Comment by dreamcaster on 01/01/01
more, very goood

Comment by Lee on 01/01/01
  Silly me, I wrote you an E-mail. That was a wonderful story with a few well defined characters. Each was interesting in their own rite and interacted nicely. I especialy liked how you got rid of janey at the party. It seemed to set the tone for later.
  Please do continue. Don't rush the story line. I look forward to the interaction of Charlie/Tiffani and his/her sister.
  Take care.

Comment by Lisa Pagent on 01/01/01
Kimberli,
What a sweet and interesting story. My only wish is that it would have been a longer story to get us where you did! :-)

Please do continue the story, and give us continuing exploits of Tiffani. I know there are complexities that will come up with Tiffani dealing with becoming the girl she didn't know she was or wanted, and I'd love to see them explored. I also look forward to how Tiffani will react to her sister, who got her into this, and is now in need of loving care. They will definitely need to do some shopping! I also think that this will certainly be taking over our heroine slowly but surely!

Keep it up, girl!

Lisa

Comment by Lesley on 01/01/01
Please continue. This is a well written story.  Can't wait to see what happens between Charlie/Tiffani and Mike.

Comment by Interested on 12/31/00
I am interested in seeing it continue. You have a lot of direct directions you could go. How far it would go. The role of the sister, etc. I hope we see more soon.

Comment by paul jutras on 12/31/00
sweet story many wish could happen to them.



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