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Hi-Tech Sissy
by Jane tv

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Comment by Vicky on 09/19/11
I thought finding this would be so aroudus but it's a breeze!

Comment by ashley on 11/20/10
great story , I love chess also!!!

Comment by juliej on 07/14/07
good story again i stand by my previous comments well done

Comment by juliej on 06/14/05
good story not only for ther staffbut for ceo what abet to place and loose without checking his oppenents streths etc what a way to go wqell done

Comment by ~sissyco~ on 03/09/05
Wow. That story was great.  PLease write more!  You're the best writer on this site. Seriously!!

Comment by Axanar on 08/02/01
Great job!  You might try an exec-becomes-secretary story sometime, or something along that line. As good as this is, you can certainly do that well!

Comment by Nellie D on 08/01/01
A nice story of retribution that twists a little along the way.

Comment by Mina deSade on 08/01/01
A much better story then the previous one, Proving that the the author CAN write. Kudos expecialy "death-wish of Nietzchean proportions" line. Good use of the analogy & on a whole well written...Mina deSade



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