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Hitch Switch
by Paul G Jutras

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Comment by Tom on 10/13/01
Good story idea and o.k. short story. Kind of not my style but others will enjoy. Did not care for the hooker part. Author should concentrate on writing longer, more in depth stories rather than numerous short ones

Comment by Eric on 10/13/01
I liked the story except for the hooker part, that caused too much jam up, too many stories going on at once - I think it would have been better if she was a just a bored trophy wife. BUt I like the trickster tricked and the body swap and that the new woman will have to spend the rest of her life being the secreatary of her former self.



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