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Her Little Doll
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Comment by juliej on 03/03/08
brilliant more please this story should continue Comment by Michelle on 04/22/07 This is my real life dream Comment by Daj on 12/30/04 I would hope for a followup story. This has great possibilities. Thank you for writting it. Comment by julie j on 11/07/04 i enjoyed this story as well hopefully their will be more to this story the whole can take so many different term i wonder what will happen next well done Comment by DJ on 12/17/03 Good story, I hope there will be more. The possibilities seem endless. Comment by Vicky on 05/21/03 "Her Little Doll" is by far one of the best erotic stories on the net. The pacing, tension, descriptions, and the way the narrator is slowly and inexorably pulled into his lover's control is awesome. I know this is an old story but I want to add my plea for a sequel. I can only imagine the progression of outfits that our Seamstress has in store for Her little doll. Comment by julie on 04/21/03 a great begining to what can be a great story I like the way she trapped him into doing her will this story can go on and I for one would like to read more to it I look forward to the next part Comment by Netsylph on 10/24/01 Wonderful story. Very sensual and teasing. I like the way the protagonists' more directly sexual interests get channeled, gradually trapping him in his lover's less direct, but more encompassing desire. Comment by Darrell on 04/06/01 Good story, I can't wait for the sequel. Comment by Gizelle on 03/10/01 This is a very titalating story. It is a complete turn-on. With lots of force and encouragement, he is turned into her plaything. What a lovely idea. I wish something like this could happen to me. Comment by Paula Jutras on 02/02/01 A great story. New meaning to playing with dolls. Comment by Anonymous on 02/02/01 GREAT STORY. How about a sequel? I was really turned on by thisone for some reason. |
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