Dear Ellie: Don't know how often you check these comments sections, just wanted to say I enjoyed your story and will definitely check out more of your pieces. Hope you'll do more with this concept- I suppose "Francie" and Richie Cunningham getting together was obvious, but the way you got us there was good.  

What can I say Ellie Dauber, but I think am getting rather addicted to your wonderful stories. What really amazes me about this particular story is that it doesn't have a dozen or so reviews for it. I mean it has everything you could want in a well crafted story. The characters and personalities were about as true to the television series as you can get (at least from what I remember from the show). I do regret not having more of Mork, because I am a big fan of Robin Williams. I think his first big break in entertainment was when he became the wacky alien from Ork.

I know this was written quite some time ago and it isn't likely you'll ever address these points I'm about to bring up, but I will bring them up nonetheless.

Francie will have to eventually explain to everyone why Fonzie never returned from Chicago. I mean you can only keep that pretense up for so long regardless of how good of a mechanic Francie is. Plus it isn't really fair to all those girls who are waiting for the Fonz to return.

Also, it seems to me that Francie still has all of what made the Fonz cool. She can still fix cars, ride a motorcycle, and make the jukebox play on its own accord, right? So, would'nt she be just as much a champion as a girl? Could it be that perhaps Mork underestimated Fonzie when he changed his gender? He didn't exactly wait around to see what would happen afterwards, and even that mental message wouldn't really let him know that he might have made an error in judgment. What if another alien was to come to earth looking for a potential champion to do battle with, and sensed the power within Francie?

Could be you have a possible sequel, and then it could just be wish full thinking on my part.

Oh, I loved how the Fonz realized what was happening to her when she rode her bike for the first time since her change. All that power between her legs throbbing, it's really a wonder she was able to make it upstairs to her apartment. ~.^


Kim.

I always like The Thumb vs The Finger in the original Mork meet Fonz episode. I your story was quite interesting. A bit long for my taste but good.