You're good, but this story isn't too good.

I don't know WHY I neglected to comment on this wonderful story when it was first posted.  Maybe it was jealousy over the fact that Prue was surpassing even my expectations of her, and her talent was growing at a rate that almost frightened me.

I cannot express how proud I am to know Prue, not my true appreciation of her skills in crafting enormously fascinating and engrossing tales.  I CAN say that her writing is even better than her talent as a muse.  I feel VERY strongly, that Prue is going to be a mainstay in this genre for a long, long time.

Yet another fine, fine bit of writing from you, Prue.  I have come to expect only the best from your fertile mind, and you have yet to disappoint me.  I doubt that you ever will.

Much love and huggles from
Cathy_t_

<<  Prue sighed, and pointed out the failure to get a correct sample resulted in less than perfect results. Telling the others, that in future, only blood samples where to be used and that hair samples were only to be used as a last resort.  >>

What bothered me was Hugglebug's apparantly casual sale of  permanent change nannites to one person to be used on another.  Prue simply took Wendy's word that it was a birthday surprise and assumed everything was benign  Prue might be well advised to be more concerned with the ethics and/or legality of selling a product that will make a permanent change in a person to someone other than that person.  What if Josie had been not quite so easy going about his change?

excellent story prue,really enjoyable

Great story -- kept me interested throughout.  I'm going to have to check up on this Hugglebugs tech for myself.

yet another enjoyable Hugglebugs story. Good work and keep this talent flowing.

Just wanted to let you know I enjoyed your story too. Thanks for writing.

Another great story, Prue.  Stories like this one is the reason you are one of my favorite authors.  My only complaint is that it was too short.  I guess you wanted to leave the reader hungry for more.  Shame on you for toying with my desires.

Yet another enjoyable Hugglebugs tale, and an example of how even Murphy's Law can lead us to a happy ending.

Glad you went back to Auckland, thats where I began.  Great story love in all different flavours. Keep up the good work I need role models.

Sigh...

Prue, How many times have I told you not to improve your writing. But noooo,you won't listen. Quit being so good! You are making the rest of us look bad!