Interesting story well written and enjoyable hope there will be more chapters as it really needs a follow up

wxMmbS Wow, great article post.Much thanks again. Cool.

Ge21re Enjoyed every bit of your article post.Thanks Again. Much obliged.

Victoria:
    I enjoyed your story - and while 12 years have passed since you wrote "Girls of Summer", I would like to see you complete it - especially with River's relationship to Bobbi.  Think about it.

I loved the story! I hope it continues ...
It's a story very sweet and kind ...
Congratulations! Kisses ...

A very sweet innocuous story.  Pity it has to stop there.

First I'd like to state a very well written story, Second where is the next part? It would be ashame if not continued.

I hope Jezzi does try to complete this story. The author has fallen off the radar. None of the e-mail addresses seem to work.

I hope Jezzi follows the suggestions I presume she made earlier, except for the sinister reason for the seeming lack of men. How about a less sinister reason, an illegal penchant (at least for hiring purposes) to discriminate in favor of newly-single, i.e., usually newly-divorced, mothers?

Please go for it, Jezzi. This story is one of the good ones.

While we are at it, could someone light a match under Marina Twelve's feet? She left a wonderful story hanging. Perhaps someone should threaten to finish "Blindsided."

Hugs,
rg

I just re-read this after 6 years.  What a great start!!  Please continue it - or if you don't want to, I would be happy to do so.

Nice story!  When will it be completed?  Are you going to finish his summer?  What about the first semester of school there?  Are you going to make any connection with his friends back where he used to live?

victoria this such a lovely story, you must complete it, desperately needs at least a part 2 or 3. you have a great story line, so gentle, a nice change from so many others. love trudy.

 THIS IS A VERY WELL WRITTEN STORY SO FAR ....AS A FAN OF YOURS
I WOULD LIKE TO SEE WEAR THIS GOES...PLEASE DON,T DISAPPOINT US
IT WOULD BE A SHAME TO WASTE WRITING TALENT LIKE YOURS
GOOD CLEAN FUN  ...LOVE IT  KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK LIKE YOU STARTED HERE .....HUGS   THANK YOU  RONE

It has been over three years, and your readers are still waiting for Part 2.
Zip

:(  Whaaa!  I tried to email Vicki, but her web address is down.  

Vicki, if you read this, here's what I wrote:
Hi Victoria!

I just read "The Girls of Summer!"  Kewl!  I see you haven't written anything lately :(  So maybe you aren't even at this address anymore,  I just wanted to say that I really liked it and wish you'd do more.


...

O.k ,so that's not ALL I wanted ^_-  

I was wondering, do you have a larger version of the title image for that story?  I *LUV* illustrated stories!

Many Hearts!

-Rhea

You have provided a unique approach with many possibilities to come.  Please keep him male and have the pleasure of River's company.  I look forward to your next chapter.  And thank you for such fun reading.

 You said - LAST APRIL that the next part was nearly ready..Come on Vicki - i'm getting desperate.

Victoria has done a splendid job with this story. I think her plot about a mother and boy moving to a new town and his mothers work making the possible change in him is well thought out. I see some more to this story and hope the author continues with another part of another story based on the first.

Diane

I really enjoyed the first part of this story and can't wait for the second part it's one of the best stories i've read

Very nicely done!
Alexis

Ok, so lets finnish this series! PLEASE!!!!

I thoroughly enjoyed the first installment of The Girls Of Summer, and I'm looking forward to the next episode.  Keep up the great work!

Great story that is very easy to read.

Please keep up the good work.

Well, I thought the story was something special;  the total absence of boys or men unusual (the only mention apart from Bobby being the inference about that 'dark woman')but all the better for that; it meant you could concentrate on the transformation without too many messy feelings about sex......and so very real that it is easy to imagine yourself in the part (I hate it when its magic, or dreams or hypnotic - keep it real, so much better for the imagination!).

I look forward to reading more;  keep up the good work Victoria!

Thank you for all the nice comments about my story.
As many of you have noticed, there is a distinct lack of speech marks.
The reason being, it was intended for posting on my own web site.
For some strange reason Fortune City replaces all commas, speech marks and semi colons with question marks.
The next chapter is nearing completion, and when it's ready I shall be updating the whole thing.
As for the 'dark haired woman' in the photos, some of you are close to realising her identity. Though things will not be quite as simple as you may think.
Vicky.
xx

Very nice story that I hope is continued.  I'd like to see Bobbi take a job at the factory salon and Yvonne discovers he has a real talent for hair and makeup.  More salon and hair scenes.  Bobbi in a formal with a curley updo.  If you want a dark side, maybe we find that Bobbi's easy acceptance was the result of post-hypnotic suggestion made at the party - probably by Cindy.  Cindy takes him the long distance to the nearest mall, and brings him out of his trance while he's trying on a bra in Vicki's Secret.  She leaves him there and he is humiliated and angry. He is rescued by River and friends; she tells him she's sorry but it's too late, the breast glue lasts 3 months.  I agree the dark lady is really his dad.  Maybe there are no dad's in the town because they've all been turned into women by the factory, which is far different from an ordinary cosmetics factory.  Can't wait for part two!
Jezzi

Uh, people, if you see the complete or not field, this story is listed as "seriel", which tells me there is at least a plan for future installments.

I have liked to leave people to finish my stories with their own imaginations leaving lots of loose ends. Some don't like that but I do. I do like stories like this, just plausible enough and and innocence that is refreshing

Pleasant, enjoyable little story. I agree w/the other comments that this has the feel of the first chapter in a larger story, and I hope that the author will continue it.

Loved you story,of course I prefer the sweet and sentimental type of stories. Yours was the type that made me visualize myself in the story.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story but am wondering why it wasnt labeled as chapter 1.. you seem to just let it drop in the last paragraph leaving the rest to our imaginations..

Like the "dark woman" in the family photo album. why do I think Daddy was that lady .. and that the divorce was because he became she fulltime and moved on ???

Please continue this saga to its natural conclusion

sweet and sentimental story. Love the part about first getting the breasts glued on.  Real good descriptions.