This is one of the best stories I have read because I would love this scenario to have happened to me when I was 11.

PLEASE CONTINUE WITH PART 2 :-)  Would love to find out about when the girls go on the shopping trip.

Philipa xxx.

This story is exactly the situation I create for myself in my imaginary inner world.  I'm a girl of about four, five, or six.  I have waist-length dark brown hair which I sometimes wear with barretes or ribbons.  My eyes are also brown.  I always wear VERY short, ribbony, lacy dresses; the softest, laciest, prettiest panties this side of Heaven; white cable-knit knee socks; and Mary Janes or penny loafers.  My precious little dresses are so short I always have to be careful how I move so I don't show my frilly pretties. Unless I'm alone (or with other girls, when we have fun comparing each other's panties).  Mommy says I'm a real girl, and real girls NEVER wear pants or anything "boy".  I guess she's right.  I've gotten used to being outdoors even in cold weather with winds whipping at my bare legs and blowing up toward my dainties. Showing your little legs to the world all the time instead of coverning them like a boy is good. It's right. I'm a girl. I'm feminine. It's what girls do. I'm not a boy. Boys cover their legs all the time with trousers. Boys' hairy legs were meant to be covered. Girls' pretty legs were meant to be shown.  Mommy talks to me about what will happen to me when I get older.  I'll have breasts and a curvy body, and she talks about something called, I think, "menna-stration", which has to do with me bleeding into my pretty little panties.  Sounds kinda icky, but I won't worry about it now. I just want to enjoy being Mommy and Daddy's little princess, and stay being totally GIRL.  And I love everyone from God on down.  It's so good.

good start

this again more please it was great how zoes mum accepted john as a daughter you have with this story a lot of potential

Yeah, we want more.
Although I just want to say it's a bit convenient how the mother just accepts right away that they are playing this.  I think she should have asked a few more questions first and maybe had a slight moral conflict about telling his parents.

great start. cant wait till they go out in public.keep up the great work and lets get chapter 2 out asap.