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Gina Is My Bridesmaid
by Janis Elizabeth

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Comment by Missy Susan Pauline on 12/17/14
Dear Ms. Janis,

I just, "loved," you short story. You introduced the characters, with their background. You write very well.

I don't get a lot of time to be at the computer. I'm my Mistress/Wife's Housemaid/husband. I work two part-time jobs and She often calls me, Her, "Chore-Girl."

Your story brought a warmth and glow to my heart. I'll be reading more of your stories, when Mistress permits me.

Sisterly yours,
"Missy," Susan Pauline


Comment by Aleesha on 03/01/09
I liked your story very much and I hope you do a sequel to see how Gina transforms into womanhood. Thanks.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 03/02/01
truely love stories with characters who care for one another. Nothing like a good wedding angle either.

Comment by Nellie D on 03/02/01
A short story of a caring older sister and her younger brother.

Comment by Gina on 03/02/01
I loved the story and I blieve it was ours from the other night Sharon. As I read the story I drifted away using my imagination.
You know I would do anything for my big sister.
Gina



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