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The Gaean Ring
by Stephanie C

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Comment by suba suba on 11/07/19
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Comment by chocopie on 12/19/18
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Comment by suba suba on 12/16/18
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Comment by crorkz on 08/03/14
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Comment by link building on 10/26/13
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Comment by link building on 09/07/13
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Comment by Comodine on 12/06/12
Intelligeant, consistent, fun, emotional and surprising.
It's not without remembering: Blood Pact (I read on Literotica)

Unfortunate that conclusion remains in the reader's mind as a poem without epitaph

Un Grand merci à vous Gente Dame Stephanie

Cariños y besitos


Comment by Bruce on 11/26/09
It's a shame this author seems to have stopped writting, I see a lot of potential here and would love to read more, I only hope so

Comment by Tiffany on 05/15/07
loved it can't wait for the continuation of this story.



Comment by Jade on 09/01/06
Hey this is wonderful I loved every story you have written This one to the Birth of Cheeta to The Young Jedi Knights version that you wrote.  But when you state that your going to write the other one and then we don't see it at all it seems to be that the author doesn't care about there fans.  I don't want to sound rude or anything but I would love to read many stories from you your a very talented writer and I loved this story and would love to read the part where ever you may have it posted at!  I would love to see anoter instalment of the young jedi knights from you but I don't care hwere you decide to post it!  Umm maybe you should try your hands at Morfs I think you would do a wonderful job there as well.

Comment by Stephanie Ann Chavez on 11/26/03
I am flattered that someone would think that I could write a story like this this, but I did not.  Stephanie C. and Stephanie Ann Chavez are two different girls.  I'm not her, sorry.  However, I do think that this is a wonderful story that is well thought out and fun to read.  Thanks for writing it.

Comment by Passing4human on 11/10/03
A wonderful story! A clever plot and characters I cared about. The only flaw I could find was Prince Tember. When first we meet him he's a tough but decent man. What accounts for his changing into somebody who would force himself upon Keal/Kayla knowing how awful it would be for K?

It's been over two years since you posted the story. Have you written the sequel whose title you mentioned, and if so where did you post it?

Again, thanks for a wonderful read.

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 11/19/02
Dear Stephanie, I was surfing randomly through the site and picked your name; I'm glad I did.  I really liked "The Gaean Ring", more so than the super hero stories.  It's been well over a year since its posting, but I hope you still intend to write/post the sequel.  I got the impression at the end when Prince Keal kept the ring that Keala might reappear????  I would like to see how you treat Tember; he was human, not totally evil - maybe he wears the ring after losing the civil war.  I can just imagine Keal putting it on his finger :-)

Comment by Lynne-Anne on 02/07/01
This was a fascinating story. It held my attention through the end. Your charatcters were well developed. I especially enjoyed the surprise ending. Congratulations on a well told story!

Comment by Mr Man on 02/07/01
I really enjoyed this story, and not just because it was well written and moving. I mainly enjoyed it because of its realistic portrayal of a transformed man. I liked that his mind wasn't changed, or that he instantly started to love wearing pretty clothes. He was a man and wanted to be one again which is a novel concept it seems. Anyway, good job and thanks for writing.

Comment by ScramblerJ on 02/06/01
Amazing story!! It got really emotional at the end and had a nice suprise twist.  That ring is one nasty little toy and seemed to cause more harm than good.  

I'm looking forward to the next one as well

jake

Comment by Xanadu on 02/06/01
A great story reminiscent of "Milady's Wiles" by Brandy DeWinter.
Thank You!



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