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Comment by ashley on 10/08/16
Loved this one ,Too bad it hasn't happened to me - - YET!! Comment by elaine on 07/18/15 loved this story i sat hear reading it in my black seamed stockings and high heels a nice sexy black cammysol and a black wig love elaine Comment by elain on 04/08/13 love going in to sexy bookshops wearing my blackundies and fullyfastion stockiings inhope some nice boy will fuck me Comment by Silvia (from Brazil) on 06/22/09 Hi! I think like Jezzi, I don't go for sex stories, but this is a good story. Comment by Jay on 05/02/09 I am breathless and trembling. Too many writers of erotic fiction write about sex as if we were animals. Your stories were romantic, sweet and powerful. I wish I could meet a sweet clerk like the one in your story...and romance her...love her and shower her with attention and kindness. Thank you for making my heart race! Comment by Jill on 03/03/09 Wonderful story. Made me want to go find a nice store and a clerk.. Comment by leelee on 03/02/09 Oh those wonderful booths How many times have I gone there? I have lost count but I never had a cute sweet sissy come into one with me. I always wear panties and camisole myself hoping to find a kindred spirit..Sometimes they will feel my lingerei and then crudely push thier cocks into my mouth NO romance in that Your story was sweet and romantic and erotic like a good booth experience should be Thanks for sharing Comment by Joan Marie on 05/09/04 Just adored the story, makes me feel so giddy and excited. Yes darling i have enjoyed playing in the booths myself with cute guys and knowing that they enjoy is so thrilling to me. Comment by Rachel Rae on 04/25/04 Loved the bookstore story but I never had that happen to me. Keep the stories coming and I'll keep reading them. Comment by Paula Thompson on 09/07/03 Hi Kristen, loved the stories you have written. They have just the right amount of fantasy and realism. The lovemaking is very erotic. Comment by Leslie on 09/11/02 I love your stories, they reflect all my fantasies. This (and The Neighbor) really turned me on. Besides understanding our dream, you can write. Comment by DarkLight on 04/09/01 A very enjoyable story. Well written. I look forward to more of her work. Comment by Paula Jutras on 04/05/01 At first I thought it was going to be like an adult TG version of the movie THE PAGEMASTER. Interesting story with a nice spot to stop. Comment by joli on 03/06/01 Oh My God! Why doesn't anything like that happen to me? Comment by Jezzi on 03/04/01 I don't usually go for the sex stories, but I kept reading, and... nice surprise ending. |
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