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For the Better
by Heather

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Comment by juliej on 07/05/04
lots of intrest in this story could have been a lot longer and explained more so that its understood better good start

Comment by Emma Brown on 03/15/04
Loved this

has lots of potential, would love to help you develop the story !!

Emma Brown
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Comment by TANYA on 02/22/04
THIS STORY SOUNDS LIKE IT WAS WRITTEN BY A TEEN WITH A WRITING ASSIGNMENT. IT HAD NO PLOT AND MADE NO SENSE. WHY DID IT TAKE SO LONG FOR THE GUY TO REALISE HE HAD A SEX CHANGE, I WOULD HAVE NOTICED THAT AS SOON AS I OPENED MY EYES.

Comment by Pickles on 05/28/01
Huh?
Love and Warmth
Pickles

Comment by Marti B on 05/28/01
A wonderful idea for a story.  I felt that I was reading an outline rather than the story though.  The individual scenes need to be fleshed out a little more.  I'm also left up in the air concerning the sex change operation.  Why would the doctors think the character is female when physiology tells them different?

Comment by Paula Jutras on 05/28/01
Even by my short story standards this one did seem a tad rushed.



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