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Forever Nikki
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Comment by oem software on 02/11/12
WpbpGB 52. "The road will be overcome by that person, who goes." I wish you never stopped and be creative - forever..!! Comment by Molly on 05/24/08 This is an awesomely painful story to read. I know this gnawing emptiness, far too well. Sex and drugs definitely cannot fill it, and neither can wealth and a pampered lifestyle. Nikki, the main character in this story -- Nikki's new keeper tells her: "One night I got picked up by a man who saw me not so much for what I was but who I could be. He helped me to become the person I am now. I'd like to do the same for you, if you'd let me." Comment by juliej on 10/14/04 this story is one of the unusual storys very good stortline well written rescued & then turned in something like stone forever what a way to go Comment by Diane Sutton on 11/28/01 Another story that made glad to have come to this author's page. I would have rather liked it much more if Nikki had stayed a beautiful girl living out her fantasy but, she was changed forever at the end of the story. The progression of the story line was well thought out and delievered in a manner that keeps the reader interested in continuing with the story rather than stopping short and not finishing. Comment by Elaine on 06/19/01 Read this on FM and it really is a well crafted story. I think it should really be sci-fi though because I dont think there is a drug that can cause the effects described. Other than that I enjoyed it |
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