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when is this story going to be finished ?

How typical of this gendre. Phantom transgressions by the victim and real attrocities by the agressors (once again women). Again I state categorically that the authors within this gendre think little of both women and men. They also transpose the delinquent personality traits generally (errantly) attributed to men and women: the women being aggressive and the men being milktoast passive.

Yes I know the kid wa rooting through his sisters things... and definately that is not to be condoned but the mother stated as motivation things the kid had yet to attempt. Like trying to swat flies with a hammer. The story is compiled adequately. The plot... infuriates me.

Make new story quick Becky since you are 30 and James[Missy] is 26!

what a set up lets hope that you finish this story its to good to leave so pleasse continue this asap

wish you had finished the story

You really know how to write a bad story!

I hope that Misss get to enjoy her new self and that she gets her first kiss on her date and maybe more

sweet story punishment to fit crime set up

just the cutest !!!

I hope that Missy is hurt badly because of this stunt they are pulling. And that it damages the trust between her and her family, irrevocably.

i love this story so far when is the next part comming please

I loved you stories very much and wish that you would add some more to it but, I then noticed that they were written a day apart back in 2000. Is there by any chance that there is more at some other site?

i love this story a fitting punishment for the crime his sister is very devious &i look forwards to the next part of this story

I love the story it reminded me of how i was raised with my mom and 3 sisters. cant wait to read more, keep up the good writing.

Nice story, but I was surprised to find pictures of Gabby Bond from Maddy Bell's site, and of her sister as well (Jules)in the illustrations!

I hope you both feel Ok about it, and dont fight over copyrights or anything!

Briar

Great story Ashley, I wish I had a sister like Becky when I was young. And I wish my mom accepted me as a girl. Both stories were just way too cool. I hope part three comes, but if not, great work Ashley!

a brilliant story so far well written and a perfect trap for james what a set up well brilliant i look foreward to reading more in due course thankyou

it is a good story to read and what happens in the third part of the story.

this was a very enjoyable story and I think you are a great writer I hope for many more story's  as well as the finish to this story line
best of luck keep up the wonderful job

Christi

A wonderful story anxious to here about the date and at school and  more dates etc.

i loved your story i wish it could of happened to me when i was that age you are a very good writer and i cant wait to read more

what a set up and a great start to this story missy/james did not know what he was letting himself in for just to keep his sister quiet and his mother had planned the whole thing with his sister missy james did not even try to argue much or attempt to run away I think that this will turn out to be a good story i hope tyhat you will continue with this story its brilliant and the drawing are ver good as well i look foreward to reading the next installmments

I so wish you would continue this story It's a very good one here!

I just loved the story line.It truly shows who the stronger sex is. Loved the illustrations, but they should have James turning into "Missy" a little subtle, going from a boy wearing his sister's clothes to one where the transformation is before our eyes. It's been 3 years since the story started, I wish you would continue it, with Missy going to St. Mary's school for girls and showing her in her school uniform and maybe joining the cheerleading squad! Missy should make some new friends at her new school and then there is always the Prom to attend. It would nice to see that her sister and mother take some compassion for their new little girl and treat her with love. Keep writing, please. I am looking forward to next installment.


Stephanie

I must have been buzzed on something that December day in 2000 when I wrote my original comments.  My first reaction upon reading this again is that the evil villains are putting James, with the personality the author has given him, into a situation where he will go postal and all the pent up anger will explode and he will turn on the two sadistic bitches and kill them.  Which is what they deserve.  They obviously have no love for him and are doing this to humiliate him for their own pleasure.  If they were really interested in turning him into a girl for his own good, Mary wouldn't have kept refering to him as her sissy brother so that everyone would know Missy was a guy.  At the very least, he should run away.  On the other hand, he was pretty stupid not to have realized early on that facing mom (when he didn't know she was behind the whole thing) was the lesser of two evils, and he is really spineless for not rebelling and just crying.  Since it's been almost 3 years since part 2, this is all probably academic anyway.

I love this story! its a great idea, plot, and i cant wait to see wat missy/james ends up being made to do by her sis, or if she'll like being a girl. Huryy up witht he next chapter!

xox
~Danielle~

Yes I would Like to see more to this I understand the Pictures are porbaly is what is taking the longest part!  But I would still Love to see more to this stroy it is one of the first one I read and one of the ones I like the best!

This story must be continued. Since this a couple of years old, I am wodnering if you had abandoned it or are still writing the next Part.
This is a fabulous story and msut be contiued.

Barb

Please continue this story, thanks!!

I haven't seen an updated of this story for awhile and really would like for you to continue this story, PLEASE!

I like the story so far, and the illustrations.  However, James starts out with a girl's figure and hair.  I think it would be better to have him go to his old school, making him make everyone think he is a sissy and likes it; this would seem more in keeping with the sadistic nature you've established for the mom and sister.  There doesn't seem to be any love for either James or Missy, just them getting their pleasure; I'd like to see them grow to like him/her - maybe offering to let Missy go back to James toward the end and he has grown to actually like being Missy and refuses.  In part 3, I think James should show some spunk and run away; when caught, maybe permanent makeup or breast implants.  Also a good hair salon/permanent scene, maybe as punishment - with an illustration of Missy in the chair with hair in curlers. (could be part of a scene where he is reduced to a 6 year old "So you can experience being a little girl, sis.")  Maybe a friend of James' who helps him run away could be transformed, too, to offer even more illustration opportunities.  Well, I do ramble on.  keep up the good work, hon.  Jezzi

This is a cute set.  Story line is a bit strained, but there are two problems with the pictures.

First off, Missy has tooooo good of a waist-line.  Sne is a boy; you need to thicken her waist.  Then include a waist whitller.  This is especially true with Mom's comment at the end of part two to put Missy on a diet to get a better girly figure.

Second, is two images give her a bit of cleavage; yet you do nothing to get that cleavage in the story line.

But I love that hair style!

Wonderful illustrations Ashley!  I enjoyed the storyline too.

A story as well done and wonderful as any of Sissy's illistrated works.

The images are very good but don't like the tone of the story. No compliments given. May or may not check back to see new chapters.

It's great to see others creating illustrated stories!  (I'm fairly partial to them, you know? <wink>)

I really enjoy the humilation aspect of this one and look forward to the continuation of the story!

Keep it up Ashley!

Awesome story keep them coming