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The Feminization of Michelle
by Aleisha James

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Comment by link building on 07/19/14
JMUg1h Hey, thanks for the post. Awesome.

Comment by Ashlie on 12/16/13
WOW can I sign up for that program PLEASE?

Comment by Annonymous on 09/07/13
I really liked the story, though I would have liked a bit more at the end with the new owner. I hope to see more from you here sometime in the future! Keep on imagining!

Comment by Silvia. on 05/25/10
Aleisha, If you don't agree with your own story! Who will?
BAD story!
Silvia.

Comment by peter joseph on 10/31/09
fantastic story, my panties were soaking, ohhh
I don't think I can stand it, how do people develop a story so well, the author is a genious
love to be with him, as was Michelle
ohhh
peter

Comment by Helena on 10/25/08
This is a great stroy and as a TV, I really appreciate it.  We need encouragement, even if it menas some pain, to relise who we are.  Keep up the good work.

Helena


Comment by Yoron on 06/07/08
Honestly my friend.

You need some real help with your fantasy's.
Not by sickos getting it on here though.

Hopefully you've already got it as you seem to stopped your writings.

Yoron.


Comment by john on 05/05/08
really great story , nicely worked out with a good ending. j

Comment by Dianna on 05/02/08
I have to agree with Jezzi. I kept hoping that something would happen, either the tables would turn or Michelle would make the ultimate, Final choice.

Comment by Giulia on 05/01/07
dear Aleisha

your story is simply fantastic. the idea of that school is very exciting and the soft forced feminization is what I like most.
please go on writing... I look forward to read more.

PS. some day I will try to write stories in English and let you know.

love

Giulia


Comment by Cassandra on 01/19/07
Hi Aleisha!

After reading this lovely work of yours, I did read through the comments already posted. I agree with the commentators. Your writing is excellent, is clear and uncluttered. The plot lines and character development are well thought out and presented. You are an excellent writer and I did enjoy the story.

Fondly,

Cassandra


Comment by burt on 10/16/05
Fantastic. I;m hooked. Please continue with this school and its girls. I wish I could be Michele. I would buy your works>

Comment by DAN on 10/01/05
Will You please continue Study in Silk. That is one of my favorite stories. You left it incomplete and me in anticipation.
Thank You for your writing.

Comment by Bobbie on 02/26/05
Aleisha, I absolutely loved your story. The mental conditioning was fabulous. I only wish you had added more detail to the eyebrow shaping and hair styling. Please write some more. Thank you. Bobbie

Comment by juliej on 02/12/05
this story  was as wicked as it was good the kidnapping & enforced feminisation are effects that need alot of consideration i have read this story through but will have to read again at another time to understand further its a wicked thing for this to happen without consent , but i must stay it was good to read i will comment further in due course well written

Comment by danielle on 01/05/05
Thank you, thank you, thank you. Your story is incredible. It almost perfectly sums up my #1 fantasy of all time. I was captivated from start to finish.

Comment by Tiffany Roberts on 11/11/04
I find Aleisha's stories to be some of my favorites on here.  I wish she would try writing again - we could use her additions.

Comment by Sabriel Kalt on 06/06/04
Your a really good writer, the only problem is, for anyone who has read your work before, you don't change. It's always the same details, and very similiar plot, you could change it around a bit you know?

Comment by joanna on 05/04/03
An absolutely wonderful story. Nothing like what I went through, but I could feel every emotion. And a truly glorious finish.

Comment by Krissy on 02/21/03
I read this story, fascinated, worried as much about what it would reveal about MY hidden desires, as about the the characters' & finished ... breathless.   Many thanks. -K

Comment by Alexia on 02/11/03
Good story, it kepts me on until I finish reading it. It´s said that when you get involved with a caracter in a movie or a reading it must be really good, for me it was.

Comment by Donna Dee on 01/23/03
 Your introduction tends to warn people off, but over 13 thousand readers can't all be wrong.  I too was glued to the screen of my monitor, unable to leave it and, at the same time, horrified when I realised what poor Michelle was being trained to go endure.  I can cope with lesbianism but I do not like homosexuality between men, consenting or othewise and therefore the end was disappointing to me.  But the writing was absolutely first class and in no way offensive, so perhaps I am adopting dual standards.  I hope you think this is constructive - it is meant o be.
Jayne

Comment by phill on 01/04/03
absolutely captivating. i have an appreciation for good story telling, including plot and character developement as well as detail and story flow. my sincerest congradulations on evoking a lustfull atmosphere in a first person point of view. i love the story context as well, kept me turned on the entire time.

Comment by ricki on 12/30/02
This has to be the best forced feminazation story i have ever read. the more i read the more i could not put it down. i had to go to work early the next morning and was looking for a good place to stop reading for the night, but it kept me in such suspence that i had to keep on reading, until i had finised the whole story. it made me want to be michelle. sincerly, ricki. michelle you lucky girl!

Comment by U.N.Owen on 09/14/02
A very special story... At first, I was horrified by the tortures, but next, the psychologically game in Michelles's mind really captivated me. The best story of this type I've ever read.

Comment by Carol on 07/03/02
Very well written I truly ejoyed the tale. Looking forward to your next story.

Comment by Fredrikka Joy on 04/21/02
This was my first really hardcore forced fem read and I admit it was difficult. I would have liked it better if Michelle had been able to exact a terrible revenge on those who in essence brutalized her as they foreced her feminization.  I guess this type story isn't gonna be this girl's cup of tea.

Comment by Jo on 11/09/01
It was a beautiful story and I loved it
Thank you

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 10/30/01
"Author's note: Despite the dark aspects of some of my stories, I do not in any way endorse the use of force or pain to compel anyone to do anything."



    If you believe this, why do you let the bad guys win? The story was a good read, but I kept waiting for the tables to turn given the above comment.




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