real

Bad story.
Silvia.

an in tersting story of being suckered by also being accepted well done

 This is more like what will happen if I was caught ... The difference being I was beaten senseless and couldnt walk for about a month ..then thrown out of the house when I turned sixteen ...
i have not been back in 40 years .. don,t miss them ether ..
my own childern have turned out great and my grandchildern are doing very well .. they make me very proud to be ME ...

thank you Rone :)

Hi Annie

This was a wonderful story that went right to the heart.  I identify with you very much about feeling very, very lonely.  

Big hugs,
Lisa

a fantasy of a good nature except for the twist at the end was it a set up or was it not a question to ask myself the calmness at the house and then the full throttle at the end parents were called i thought they were already their intresting compilation well done

I liked the story but got sidetracked when you switched from the first person to the 3rd person narrative, then back to the first person again. All in all, it was an enjoyable story.

Oh if reality was as sweet as some of the stories we read from other others. I loved this one because of the ending. The first part was done well and the next was rushed a bit. The ending made up for it!

Well done!
Huggles
Angel

love your stories! :) understand the loneliness too ! :(( would love to be your friend! :) ... if you want. :)

May the Lady guide and guard you in all your ways and on all your paths. :)
Blessed Be! :)

 aine :)

I hope you don't mind one big compliment for all of your stories. Short, entertaining, possible. I enjoyed them very much. In fact this is the first time I have written to you, but the third time I have read your tales.  DeeDee

Nice story remind me a little of my A TS FANTASY story. A little depressing ending though.

Found the story - enjoyable til the last few passages.  Then it became a depressing piece of prose.  Ann, you do an excellent job of creating the feel of the story.  You don't waste words or time,  good job.
Too often, I have seen other "sisters" depressed from those feelings of hopelessness, unwantedness, and the general maladies of life.
If this is your story of life,  drop me a note.  I am willing to listen and chat with you.
Cayli

A nice story that ended where the fantasy did, the rest was depressing. I know the feeling of alone and don't wish it on anyone. My feelings of alone has ended but many others still suffer. Back to the story, the writing was good as usual and the detail enough to convey the feel of the story.