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Evolution
by Mardee Louise Prynne

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Comment by Stefan on 10/30/13
This story is definitely different.......

Comment by Silvia       (from Brazil) on 10/13/09
This isn't a good story. I'm sorry!
Silvia.

Comment by Jeff on 05/24/08
"Sometimes, a cigar is...much more than a cigar." Penis envy is a bitch, isn't it? Goodness knows what there is to envy about it, though...

Comment by juliej on 09/26/06
evolution a good name for this story its intrsting how it came around a different situation a girl wanting to wear boys clothes this could go further with more intersting scenes worth writing more



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