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Evil Step Daughter
by Carolyn Collins

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Comment by DOM on 03/06/14

BRILLIANT AND EROTIC STORY CAROLYN, GOES INTO MY TOP TEN OF THE LAST TWENTY YEARS,

Comment by Jozef on 01/08/13

It was an absolute exqtusiie day! These photos bring a smile to my face and I will never forget the perfect weekend- so happy to have been a part of it!The best to both of you always!!Aunt Jeanne and Uncle Pat(Pat III thought his beer mug was a perfect gift and Melissa is wondering if Carolyn enjoyed Full House on the way to Hawaii)

Comment by Silvia on 06/22/11

very bad

Comment by SassySue on 07/18/10

While this story by Carolyn Collins was well written and highly erotic, I was disturbed at the treatment of Beth and Little Jerry since they were young teenagers who did nothing wrong and were in no way responsible for Missy being raped by her stepfather. Missy was truly evil for doing what she did.
SS

Comment by juliej on 04/28/04

an intresting story revenge is so sweet when it happens its a very heavy story but well written and very enjoyable

Comment by sissy moan on 12/13/02

i really LOVE this story and i would like to hear more about this perfect family. So please do us the favor to write a sequel to it.

curtsey, Your sissy moan

Comment by sean on 09/07/02

i found this story of yours very erotic as well as most of your other stories . thank you for writing them

Comment by Sissy Priscilla Valentine on 08/14/01

I'm soooo jealous of little Jenny! How I'd love to have a "Missy" in my life to take me the places she took our little sister. You are an inspiring writer, know any Missy's who'd take revenge on me? :-)

Kisses,

Sissy Prissy

Comment by dj on 04/11/01

good

Comment by Admirer on 01/05/01

This is another triumph for you Carolyn. This story, although written with incredibly evil intent, races along at an alarming pace, and the last fifth of the story was awesome - the only word to describe it.

Once again, I love the play on race relations, and hope that your writing - in my opinion some of the best in amateur novelettes - continues along similar veins, with as great a diversity of imagination.

Thanking you once again for posting this immense piece of work for the enjoyment of myself and others.

Yours etc.

Admirer

Comment by Admirer on 01/05/01

This is another triumph for you Carolyn. This story, although written with incredibly evil intent, races along at an alarming pace, and the last fifth of the story was awesome - the only word to describe it.

Once again, I love the play on race relations, and hope that your writing - in my opinion some of the best in amateur novelettes - continues along similar veins, with as great a diversity of imagination.

Thanking you once again for posting this immense piece of work for the enjoyment of myself and others.

Yours etc.

Simon

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