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Esther
by Jamie B.

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Comment by Mr Man on 12/29/00

Hi,
I think you have some really terrific story ideas, but what you have submitted is really nothing more than a plot synopisis. Please work on developing your characters and how they deal with the situations you put them in. You have a lot of potential. Just take a little more time to work on the "story". Thanks for writing, and good luck in the future.
Mr Man

Comment by Nellie D on 12/13/00

The story was fairly good but was almost too short. The presentation needed some work, especially capitolization.

Comment by paul jutras on 12/13/00

short but incrediblely sweet. I especially like the ending when Ester woke up and was approached in bed.

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