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Emma - Taken By Surprise
by Sara Rever Eveille

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Comment by Sharon on 04/05/10
A beautiful story,having sex with your sister it is lovely my sister and i did it every night and we still do.

Comment by dee on 09/10/07
Emma is a very exciting young girl and has an awful lot to learn. Its
great that she has such a slut sister to teach her. Reading about her
continuing adventures would be quite a thrill.

Comment by julie j on 11/08/04
a good story i am surprised his sister was so soft with him instead of angry good story

Comment by "Ruth" on 06/26/01
Good story. If you have the time, please more chapters.

Comment by Rick on 06/22/01
Great story. Definitely would like to see more chapters.

Comment by John on 05/14/01
I really like this story please continue, if possible could you
add more humiliation.

Comment by "Veronica" on 05/06/01
I thought the story was excellent. I do find these type of situtions to be very stimulating. I do hope you will continue with Emma's new lifestyle and possibly tight situations. Please write more I did enjoy it very much!



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