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Embers Dying, Spark The Flame
by Way Zim

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Comment by Priyanka on 07/09/12
I'm also an EBC student.  I have seen Ben a cpuole of times and don't know him personally.  I have so much love and prayer for him and for his family.  I like many have experienced a peace about his condition immediately after his accident.  God revealed to me during my early prayer that Ben would survive but it was supernaturally by God that he survives.  I still pray confidently with this peace in mind.  Our God is so good, mighty and merciful.  I am confident that this trial is working for His glory and that Ben is within the secure hold of his Creator.I have told others even non-believers about Ben's accident and it is already serving as an advancement for the gospel.  Bless you all.  Much love.  I look forward to seeing Ben at school again.Marissa.

Comment by Dee Holland on 11/12/09
I think Diane expects every story in this genre and on this site in particular to be centered on getting the reader 'off'. If you accept this premise, she is right.

However, as a well crafted short story, it is far better than anything you might expect to find here and it does fit the genre if you allow that the protagonist 'saves' Rowen by inhabiting her child.

Well done in my estimation.


Comment by Diane Sutton on 08/10/01
A well written story about an artist who seems to dream about a former life.
But, it contains almost no transformation or other things that might hold the interest of readers to this site.
I liked the story for what it is but, would have liked to have had some content dealing with male to female transformations as opposed to this type of writings.
If your looking for a nice story and nothing more than this is fine but, don't expect what the other stories listed on this site will give you. It isn't here.
Diane



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