That inishgt would have saved us a lot of effort early on.

Nice warm, fun story.  Just wanted to let you know if you're planning to republish elsewhere - there are two references to Janet Grant at the end of Part 3 that should presumably be Janet Stickney.  (Though since she's named Janet Grant in Donna's story, there's certainly an argument for going the other way.)

Eric

Hi, I've very much enjoyed the Lisa stories. Do you plan to write anymore? An adoring fan.

I must repeat -- this should be the real deal!
   The love and warm feelings in this family is the way life should be, not the way life is. There should be more love in the world, not the idiotic I have got to have (fill in) than you.
   Peace of the Goddess be with you.

I'm glad I had found this story after the second part was completed. I think I'd love to take part in this family. Loved the whole thing from start to the end of the second part.

Good story line and a wonderful author to bring it to us.

Diane

Very well done. I wish all kids behaved as nice as John/Lisa. Looking forward to the next installment.

Again the spoiler "Work of fiction." Oh Pooh!
 The main focus on sweet interaction between John and others is the way I wish kids could be! Maybe we would have less Columbines if more men were girls at a young age!  

Another warm and tender Lisa story. The richness lies not in the action, but in the feeling tone and details. I look forward to the next part!

always ready for a sweet tale like this.