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The Dressmaker's Model
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Comment by cbd washington dc on 03/02/21
tDKWgR You can certainly see your enthusiasm in the work you write. The world hopes for more passionate writers such as you who aren at afraid to say how they believe. All the time go after your heart. Comment by mattew crorkz on 08/01/14 okIn9W Appreciate you sharing, great article post.Really thank you! Really Great. Comment by crorkservice on 07/18/14 tQRcSc Thanks-a-mundo for the post. Fantastic. Comment by Ray on 12/29/11 Just a really good story. I would have preferred it to be longer. I left feedback only a week or so ago, to another author, where so many stories go through "the operation." The reality, for most of us, is that we have a feminine side, and a male side. And live with that. A lovely story, I hope you write some more like this, that I can identify with. Best wishes, Ray Comment by Silvia. on 07/31/10 I think that Alissa should have made the SRS, and be married with a guy. Comment by Christy Ann W. on 05/22/10 A very lovely story...I've read it twice now and it stays wonderful! I do love aunt and niece stories; nothing better! Love, Christy Comment by Janice Armstrong on 07/12/07 I loved "The Dressmaker's Model", Alyssa. The story is quite realistic, and your description of the sensual feelings Al experiences when asked to put on feminine undies and dresses is so graphic yet gentle and understanding. When he dates Jerry your writing becomes very arousing as Al is absorbed into his female persona to the point where he actually wants to be taken, as the woman he has become - almost. Congratulations, please send us more. 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Congratulations on taking the road less traveled and having Al stick around and as a guy marrying a woman. I can see the story continuing with Al/Allisa as a 24/7 non-op TS, however. I think there should be a second wedding ceremony with Allisa as the bride, too. Comment by Brenda on 02/06/04 i truly related to the first part of yor lovely story. When I was a little boy of 5 or 6 my mother had me try on a zillion procession dresses for my sister. You can read my story on PettiPond.com; "The blue satin nightgown" Mine is a TRUE story that I have lived with and taken out to relive whenever I need to feel like a little school girl . Comment by Sissy Priscilla Valentine on 08/30/01 OOOO what a great story! I think our heroine missed a great deal by not going further with her beau, and her bi-nature would have been more wonderfully explored in the doing....I hope to see more like this from you! When you get the chance, I'd love for you to read and render your opinion on my very first and only story; "Becoming Sissy" which was posted for the first time publicly, on this site 8/6/01. Comment by Jamie Elizabeth Burgess on 06/07/01 The Dressmaker's Model was a story that got through my reality checks and really piqued my interest. I liked his gentle introduction to crossing and his growing sense of security. I wasn't particularly enthused when he dated a boy because of my personal negatives over being molested at age 11. I was happy to see acceptance by his sister amd the "don't care" response from the parents (which did stretch my credulity). The nice introduction to sex by the older woman/mentor was also a nice way to encounter this exciting part of life. Meeting his life partner while dressed was something else that resonated with me (I was a "little sister" from 2-5). |
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