Hi Lorraine.
The girls and the boys, are to young for marriage, their brains can be adults brains, but they are children now, and they can't marrry one another.They must wait and grow up until they all to be adults and  marry.
But, I loved the story, great story. Write always!
Kisses.
Silvia.

I enjoyed the story and can't wait for the next part.

Susan

very good,cant wait till the next one

Love the story. Have read it twice already and may read it again. I eagerly await the next chapter. May the Goddess Bless All.

I keep rereading the story as something nagged me as being a slight problem.  Taylor and Evelyn are brother and sister, Julie is now Taylor's daughter and Freddie always was Evelyn's son.  That would make them first cousins, by law that is too close for marriage and a BIG problem genetically.  It might be better to only have Ashley become Br'ide's and Taylor's daughter, leaving the rest of the girls alone.

Just my $0.02

In the name of the Lady,
Greetings sister!
VERY WELL DONE!!! Please do more!

Now may the Lady guide and guard you as you continue on your path!
Merry Meet,Merry Part and Merry Meet again!

Gum Till Do Cheum,As Gach Cearn,Fo Rionnag-iuil an Dachaidh!
Thoet Se!
{May your steps return from all the corners of the globe,under the guidance of the star,that points to home!}
{So mote(or must)it be!}
:-) {An old Gaelic blessing} :-)

Wonderfully written!  Love pours out of this story from all sides.  No wonder everyone gets regendered!

If you don't gt the next segment out, I will cry!!!!

One of the best stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I anticipate the continuation of this great story.