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I really appreciate the artfull way  you opened the spiritual truth to us, that we are all just below the surface, different creatures than our outward apperance reveals.

I would have liked to see more resistance from him.  When given the choice, I was rooting for him to say, "I'm Luke, damnit.  Do your worst!"  Not because I wanted him to end up male, but because of the way she had forced/tricked him into it.   I would have liked to see a goddess shocked for a change, she was so sure she had "her".  This was well written, but I prefered "Girls of Summer"

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 The sheer eroticism of thistale made me stick with it to the end - and what an end, WHAT A WAY TO GO - it almost made me wish I was one of them!

great. I like real stories, with believable backgrounds. Lokk forward to the next offering.

Paula

Hmmm  I've probably ridden over that road myself on both motor and pedal cycle, in the rain and soaking wet, but nothing happened to me. There aren't that many roads over the High Peak, I could just do with an adventure like that!

Seriously, I enjoyed your story and the style even though there are some inconsistencies in the treatment of Luke/Lucinda.  When you have the capability of magic, why use physical means of control?  Perhaps for the psychological effect on the victim.  I don't really know why people get uptight about the rating.  It's not particularly explicit and there even XXX rated stories which are excellent.  If well written all ratings can be well woth reading.  In fact some of the worst stories are 'R' rated and written by Enid Blyton!

I knew this story was going to be magic, but I liked "Girls of Summer" (which I hope you continue) so I started reading anyway.  You are an excellent writer, and I really liked it as it sounded like a straight forced femme story with goth overtones.  And then bang, magic.  Why? Why did she bathe, shave, perfume, moisturize if she uses magic?  Why the bondage if she could control him mentally?  I think it would have been better as a regular forced femme story.  Also, I'd like him to have chosen the alternative and see what the goddess would do - would she really let him die after the promise to his mother?

Not really big with storys with such a rating but enjoyed areas of this tale.

Well, what do you think of this one then?
A bit diffrent from 'Girls of summer' isn't it.
I wanted to try a spot of writing at the other end of the spectrum.
I'm still not altogether happy with the x rated nature of it though.
It almost seems to spoil a good tale.
I may be tempted to write a less graphic version.
Let me know what you think.
Vicky.

I tried to send an E-mail via the link at the bottom of your story page but it would not go through. Darn, I had a long winded note there.
  Well done.

"Changes must be made."

A Little different to your first offering but just as good.

Skimmed over story but decided to pass due to X rating.