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The Diabetic
by Alyssa Davis

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Comment by walter on 12/28/12
bella storia dolce e simpatica

Comment by Stephen on 07/25/11
I loved the story the DIABETIC , it was sentimental ,sexy ,and relieved the man from having to be responsible for  the changes he  wanted  but would have never had on his own

Comment by Silvia. on 06/01/10
Sorry Alyssa.
I think Dale should have been warned about hormones.
Silvia.

Comment by juliej on 12/30/08
sweet story

Comment by Aleesha on 11/03/08
I am a diabetic and it could be good if my wife the hint.

Comment by DEE on 09/14/07
GOOD STORY

Comment by juliej on 05/14/06
a swet story of progression this is whaty he wanted to do and was helped alone that road welldone

Comment by dzvoo on 10/13/01
Nice narrative style , stellar punctuation and spelling.  So, so sweet.  Resistng having the heroine puncture her mate with a strap-on and having a "real" man on the side shows restraint and taste.  Not that that's wrong.

Comment by SassySue on 08/15/01
Nice short story.  I'm envious that Dale's wife was so helpful in accommodating and encouraging his cross-dressing.

While the story was enjoyable as written, it could have been fleshed out with more details to make really interesting and entertaining.

Maybe you could write a sequel where Dale gets to put his new breasts to good uses.

Comment by "Ruth" on 05/31/01
Very well written. If on;ly hormones were that easy to obtain.

Comment by "Ruth" on 05/31/01
Very well written. If on;ly hormones were that easy to obtain.

Comment by Paul on 12/18/00
another short but wonderful to read story. Love the description of what the husband went through. Truely well writen and well worth reading.



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