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The Dance II
by Sarah Jones

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Comment by elain on 05/29/13
i wish i could find a nice pair of girls to dress me and make love to  me in nice seamed nylons and sexy under ware

Comment by Maryann on 07/10/07
Love the story, Andrew is a lucky guy!! Wish it was me xxxx

Comment by Paula Thompson on 04/05/03
Hi Sarah, the dance was a wonderful story and I wish it could happen to me for real.
Love the sensuous way you write. Hope you write more stories like this. Thank you Love Paula

Comment by Joanna on 07/11/01
Love it, proof that a story can be good, gentle, and still intriguing.  We need more of this type. Please go on.  Joanna  

Comment by Jennifer on 06/25/01
Loved the story! Very gentle but I loved the feeling that the girls were taking over! Please continue the saga!

Comment by kimber on 06/07/01
Great Story! Cannot wait for the next part! What a lucky person to be in Andrew's position.

kimber

Comment by "Ruth" on 05/26/01
Charming! Lucky, lucky Andrew I am jealous!

Comment by pantyruffle on 05/18/01
love the story!!  keep it up!!

Comment by Paula Jutras on 05/18/01
a honest well done begining.



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