I'v read all of your stories that I could find and find them all in good taste and very enjoyable .  The best written of all.

Jemma was deceived by her mother and sister. They told to her father without she know.
This isn't fair, and I don't like lies.

sweet story very pleasent to read

GOOD STORY BUT THE SPICE GIRLS REALLY THEY STINK, WHY NOT THE GO, GOS, AT LEAST THEY COULD SING.

 This is a fun and lovely story ...  genteel and loving family ..
as I see it this boy will grow into a sensative and caring man if he doesn,t go back to being a girl ...  who knows but you ..

a second chapter would be nice .... thank you for writting and you have magic fingers for story telling .....

Thank you Rone

I agree with Wilma R. as far as the grammar and punctuation are concerned. I try very hard myself to have all this as perfect as possible when I am writing, but I occasionally get myself all mixed up and have to go over it again and again. Frustrating!
Apart from that all Amanda's tales are lovely and I wish I had her imagination. Best wishes to you Amanda, more stories please.

a sweet story but of two bossy sisters who were kind in their way it was not long enough but wellwritten &explained i would be intrested if you could do another part to this story  

Please rewrite the story and fill it out. The end with the boy, James, came too quick. There needs to be more story in between.

Keep writing and writing..

That's a sweet story. Thank you. However, you need to brush up on the rules for writing dialog. If a character makes a statement, the words within the quotation marks must end with a comma and the next word begins with an lowercase letter unless it is a name. Near the beginning of your story you wrote: "Just ask, saying no is easy." He replied coldly.    This should have been: "Just ask. Saying no is easy," he replied coldly.    Or you could have written: "...Saying no is easy," Jim replied coldly.    The main exception to this occurs right at the beginning of your story. If the quoted words are a question, you puctuate with a question mark before the closing quotation mark, as you did, but the next word still  begins with a small letter unless it is a name. So you should have written: "And what's the magic word?" he replied.

Enjoyed your story, thanks.

I always enjoy the warm, friendly feeling tone of Amanda's stories. This one makes me sad that I was an only child--I would like to have had Jim's (Jemma's)sisters!

A neat little story of a brother helping his sisters. The story almost seemed to push the ending too fast, it needed something more.

The writing was fairly good and the details and descriptions not too bad but needed more to define the characters better.