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Club Fantasy
by Ariel Davidson

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Comment by Silvia. on 10/22/10
It's much fantasy!

Comment by Priscilla Ann on 02/18/08
Sweet little fantasy. Please finish it.

Comment by shalimar on 12/19/06
At the point you put "End of Story" I though this is the begining of the story.  This is just a sketch, the begining of what coud be an excellent story.

Shelly aka shalimar

Comment by Sharon on 09/21/02
  Fantastic story. I hope there is a continuation.

Comment by Heather St. Claire on 12/19/00
This is a great beginning. I hope the author will tell us the next part....It certainly grabbed and held my interest right from the get-go. Lots of great detail. Who knows, this place might even be the new "universe" that so many people are clamoring for right now.

Comment by paul jutras on 12/19/00
Short but wonderful tale that was well worth the time to read. Though this is one time I would of like the story a little longer and see what happened when on stage.

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